Talk:Rhythm Inside (Loïc Nottet song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 15:53, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

"Previously, Nottet had participated in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014" - in his
"for his Selfocracy Tour (2017-2018)." - en dash is needed in place of the hyphen

Background and composition

"Belgian singer Loïc Nottet rose to fame after finishing second in native singing competition The Voice Belgique in 2014," - became prominent after finishing second in his native
"Another editor of Wiwibloggs pointed out" - mentioned

Critical reception and accolades

"Music critics received "Rhythm Inside" with positive responses." - positively received "Rhythm Inside".

Music videos

"although it had been since deleted." - has
"the clip was first broadcast on Belgian television La Une." - television channel
"According to Chris Haplin of Wiwibloggs, the clip "focuses on opposites and fighting conceptions, with shots including two young girls: one a beauty queen, the other playing with dinosaurs" - needs to be sourced
"the woman awakens again and proceeds into leaving the building." - to leave the building.
"she finds a clock on one tree" - on a tree

In Vienna

"They occasionally perform choreography in form" - in the form
"Michael Cragg pointed out that Nottet" - drew attention
Italise The Guardian as it is a print publication

Points awarded to Belgium

Remove the link to the word "Netherlands" since its already linked in the previous sub-section

References

References 47 & 50 should be spelt as ESCToday like in ref 35
Remove eurovision.tv in Reference 49
The author is missing from references 10, 14, 48, 49, 51, 53 and 62

That's my lot. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thank you very much for reviewing the article! I have implemented all your suggestions, except there were no authors given in refs 48 and 62. Greetings

! ; Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:36, 14 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:12, 15 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]