Talk:Raymond Leane/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: Hawkeye7 (talk · contribs) 22:52, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. All in-line citations are from reliable sources, including those for direct quotations, statistics, published opinion, counter-intuitive or controversial statements that are challenged or likely to be challenged, and contentious material relating to living persons—science-based articles should follow the scientific citation guidelines:
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Some comments; see below
- Pass or Fail:
- Comments
- Link the 45th, 47th and 49th Battalions
- Link Ronald Hopkins
- Give Major Allen's full name, and link to his article
- 12th Brigade is linked twice in the lead
- Suggest adding the {{Australian Generals of World War I}} navbox
- 2nd Division is linked twice in the body
Looks good. Hawkeye7 (talk) 22:52, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- G'day Hawkeye7. Thanks very much for the review. All done. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 23:53, 23 August 2017 (UTC)
- Okay. Passing now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 00:20, 24 August 2017 (UTC)