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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:55, 5 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This has waited for a review too long; I'll provide one. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 22:55, 5 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

  • "As a teenager she moved to Jakarta to study there.[1] She attended Senior High School PSKD Menteng." these two sentences could be combined for better flow.
  • Done.
  • "She later returned to Indonesia." when?
  • Not in source, but rephrased (how's this?)
  • Is there a reason why Soeharto is used instead of Suharto?
  • Dur. Usual spelling here, but you're right, we should use Suharto on Wikipedia per COMMON
  • "She was not elected." did she even get on the ballot? She doesn't show up in the election article so if not, that'd be worth mentioning.
  • Would I need a source that specifically says that, or is one that lists the people on the ballot acceptable?

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:27, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]