Talk:Ratna Sarumpaet
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Ratna Sarumpaet was one of the Media and drama good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake. | |||||||||||||
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 14, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Ratna Sarumpaet's singing of the Indonesian national anthem was called "proof" of a crime? | |||||||||||||
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Ratna Sarumpaet/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:55, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
This has waited for a review too long; I'll provide one. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 22:55, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks. Not as long as Poedjangga Baroe, but certainly too long. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:46, 5 August 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "As a teenager she moved to Jakarta to study there.[1] She attended Senior High School PSKD Menteng." these two sentences could be combined for better flow.
- Done.
- "She later returned to Indonesia." when?
- Not in source, but rephrased (how's this?)
- Is there a reason why Soeharto is used instead of Suharto?
- Dur. Usual spelling here, but you're right, we should use Suharto on Wikipedia per COMMON
- "She was not elected." did she even get on the ballot? She doesn't show up in the election article so if not, that'd be worth mentioning.
- Would I need a source that specifically says that, or is one that lists the people on the ballot acceptable?
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:27, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Done most of those. One question for you. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:21, 8 August 2012 (UTC)
- Showing the ballot list works fine; the rest checks out. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 02:33, 9 August 2012 (UTC)
- How's this? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:52, 9 August 2012 (UTC)
- Looks good; article now passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 05:05, 9 August 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:53, 9 August 2012 (UTC)
GA Reassessment
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- Result: There is general agreement this should be delisted. Hog Farm Talk 01:42, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
The article has had a "recent events" yellow banner since 2018 in the "Politics" section, which I agree with. Z1720 (talk) 01:00, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
- As original nominator, I agree with having GA removed. I won't have time to update the article, and frankly with the 2024 elections coming up and her politicking the article won't likely be stable for a while. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 09:54, 21 August 2023 (UTC)
- As reviewer, agree with both above. Wizardman 01:11, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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