Talk:Ramu (1966 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Kting97 (talk · contribs) 15:34, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Hi, will look at this. Give me a few days, thanks. Kting97 (talk) 15:34, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Hi User:Kailash29792 – Do you actually have a copy of the Kaliki issue you reference or are you basing it on just the uploaded image? I may have to ask for a second opinion re the reliability of an uploaded image. Kting97 (talk) 16:38, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
- Extracted from here. I did so for the sake of archiving. And it's Kalki. Kailash29792 (talk) 16:48, 27 April 2023 (UTC)
- Kting97, you still active? Kailash29792 (talk) 08:27, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
Drive-by comments by Ssven2
[edit]Just a couple of comments if that's cool.
- Is it "title" or "titular"? I think its the latter. Do check.
- There are two Kaduvetti towns. Is it the one in Ariyalur, Trichy or in Thirunelveli?
- "wife Seetha and son Ramu during Pongal." — "festival of Pongal" would be ideal for the readers who just read it and don't click on the link even if there is a link.
- "Raja becomes dejected; after being robbed, he attempts suicide with his son but both listen to a prayer, reconsider and return to Lakshmi's village." — Who robs them? Robbers passing by or someone familiar to them? And what prayer doe they listen to?
- When does Ramu get a dog?
- Any chance to get the latest economic figures for 2023 that is?
- "friends of Saravanan" — "Saravanan's friends" would be good enough. Also why did they have misgivings?
- Why is he named Ganesh instead of Ganesan?
- "Composed" instead of "Set" for either of the ragas would be ideal.
Good luck with the article, my friend. Hope it passes. — Ssven2 Looking at you, kid 11:52, 13 June 2023 (UTC)
Kailash29792, as the reviewer seems to have left Wikipedia, I have followed the abandoned review instructions; hopefully a more attentive reviewer will be found shortly. Best wishes, ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 14:25, 8 August 2023 (UTC)