Talk:Quinton Hooker/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 21:39, 3 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Concerns have been addressed. Thank you for your time. JTtheOG (talk) 07:01, 15 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass
Pass/Fail:

Can He played with the Howard Pulley Panthers on the AAU circuit, although most of the attention focused on his teammate, five-star recruit Tyus Jones be extended or merged into a paragraph?

Although he expected to redshirt his freshman year please add was after he
With four guards graduating the year prior, Hooker's minutes doubled in his sophomore season and he was the only player to start and appear in all 30 games, leading the team in scoring (12.8 ppg), assists (4.2 apg), and steals (1.5 spg). not sourced
Nevertheless, the Fighting Hawks finished third-last in the conference with a 4–14 record (8–22 overall), failing to qualify for the conference tournament. unsourced

In his junior season, he stepped into a leadership role on a team with no seniors, may I recommend changing "he" into Hooker
He ranked third in the Big Sky in scoring with 20.1 points per game, which was also the best scoring mark in school history since UND moved up to Division I. unsourced
Not sure how I feel about words like exploded as it seems to be a WP:EUPHEMISM or MOS:PUFFERY.
Are two references necessary for Lou Henson National Player of the Week and, for the second time that month, Big Sky Player of the Week?
Reference 19 doesn't state Hooker was named to the all-tournament team
In the Senior season paragraph, you don't mention his name until the fifth sentence
The team won seven of their last eight regular-season games to finish with a 14–4 Big Sky record and the regular-season conference title. unsourced

He made his pro debut on September 30, coming off the bench during a defeat to Miasto Szkła Krosno, and by December he was the starting point guard. unsourced
He joined French second-tier club please add the before French
Vichy-Clermont finished in third place in the league but were upset in the first round of the playoffs by Gries Oberhoffen. unsourced
Additionally, he played in 18 BCL games, posting averages of 8.7 points, 3.3 rebounds, 2.9 assists and 1.4 steals per game. unsourced

Is there anything that can be added for personal life?