Talk:Put Yourself in My Place (Kylie Minogue song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 15:36, 5 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Review arriving soon... Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:36, 5 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

from her fifth self-titled studio album → from her fifth and eponymous studio album
as the album's second → as the record's second (word rep.)
themes of leaving a relationship → themes of ending a relationship
from music critics. Majority of the critics complimented → from music critics, with the majority of them complimenting
songs composition → song's composition
top twenty → top 20
However, it was certified → Additionally, it was certified
Unlink "music video" as it's a pretty common term
and the narrative was loosely inspired by the film → with its plot being inspired by
Minogue portraying the titular character → Minogue impersonating the titular character
spaceship, whilst getting → spaceship while getting undressed

Infobox

CD1 cover. → Cover artwork used to commercialize physical editions of the single.

Background and composition

fifth self-titled studio album → fifth and eponymous studio album
career, he noted → career, noted
was one of Minogue's most personal → was one of the singer's most personal
ballad-inspired track → ballad-inspired recording (word rep.)
Denning, and Hunter Felt → remove comma
Chris True at → Chris True of AllMusic
vocals span between the notes B♭3 and D5 → vocals span from B♭3 to D5
Julie Aspinall, who had written an biography about Minogue, stated → The fact that she's written a biography about the singer is not needed here; please remove
Audio sample > A sample of Kylie Minogue's single "Put Yourself in My Place", which has been described → A 37-second sample of "Put Yourself in My Place", a song described

Release

were released in the UK → were made available in the United Kingdom
Add year of release to "Confide in Me" and "Where Is The Feeling?"
were published in the UK; one featured → were made available in the United Kingdom, with one of them featuring
The cassette tape was issued in the UK, which featured → A cassette tape issued in that same territory featured
were by British → were photographs by British
which featured Minogue → and featured Minogue
with headphones on → Remove "on"
on; according to Minogue's → on. According to the singer's
he felt the shots → remove "he felt"
you could add a "Release history" section to the article, as you always do

Critical response

was one of the album's "finest" songs → do you mean the compilation or her studio album here?
commented that, "'Put → remove comma
parent album, but noted → parent album, and noted
"ballad" → remove ""
June 2016; Rogers complimented the production and said "The second → June 2016 alongside complimenting the production and confessing, "The second

Commercial performance

top twenty → top 20
longest charting single at the time → longest-charting singles at that time
The single was certified Gold → "Put Yourself in My Place" was certified Gold
top 10 → top ten
and spent a total of 9 weeks inside the top 100 chart, thus making it one of Minogue's longest charting singles in that region as well, upon its release. → and remained a nine editions inside the chart as one of the singer's longest-spanning recordings in that territory.
during the chart week of 6 February → during the week ending 6 February
1995. It peaked at number 86 on its second week, and stayed in the top 100 for four weeks. → 1995, and peaked at number 86 in its second week alongside staying four editions in the chart.

Music video

Unlink "music video"
and the narrative was loosely inspired by the film → and its plot was inspired by
she stated that she had been a "massive" fan → remove "she stated that" + she is a "massive" fan
the film's lead actress → the movie's lead actress (word rep.)
and wires; majority of the shooting → and wires; the majority of the shooting
Minogue commented in her 2002 book → The singer commented in her 2002 book
Minogue also complained → Minogue further complained
nineteen hours → 19 hours
on both days → on both filming days
Minogue's characteristics in the video → You have already said "video "before; alternate here with "visual"
which included a large staff that help with styling, hair, and make-up → for which a large staff that helped with styling, hair styling and make-up was required.
I prefer editing the synopsis by myself before passing.
sexual appeal in the video → you've already used "video before"; use "clip" here
analysed the video more → further analysed the video
art... She → art [...] She
labelled the video "cheeky" → labelled the visual "cheeky"
won the award for the single in the Best Video → won the award for Best Video
has cited the video → has cited the clip
favourites.[7][15][4] → put refs in right order

Live performances and other uses

Title of the section > Live performances and other usage
performed a some of → performed on some of
concert tour, which appeared on the opening segment. → concert tour in the opening segment
An acoustic version was performed as one of the opening tracks to her 2001 → This version was sung as one of the opening tracks of her 2001
which also featured the titular track, "Confide in Me", "Finer Feelings", and "Dangerous Game" → Remove comma before enumeration and "titular track"
The Driza-Bon remix appeared on her → The Driza-Bon remix was included on her
had covered → has covered

Formats and track listings

Australian and UK CD 1 → Australian/British CD 1
Australian and UK CD 2 → Australian/British CD 2
UK 12" vinyl 1 → British 12" vinyl 1
UK 12" vinyl 2 → British 12" vinyl 2
Unlink "Where Is The Feeling?"

Credits and personnel

Credits adapted from the CD liner notes of Kylie Minogue: → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Kylie Minogue.
Unlink every name here

Charts

why don't you use automatic chart tables for the charts?

Certifications

Add this as a subsection to "Charts and certifications"

Other stuff

Copy-violation

19.4% is ok!

Images and others

Audio sample is way too long. Please upload another one which has audio limited to under 25 seconds
Image from the music video adds nothing to the article. Please add an image from the film instead and remove the actual one.

Links

One redirect here. Please fix!

References

It's not "Hung Median", but "Hung Medien"
Australian-charts.com → Australian Charts
As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
1 dead link out here! Please fix!

Good job with this!

On hold! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:20, 10 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Cartoon network freak: all done! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:01, 18 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:21, 18 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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