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Lead

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  • from her fifth self-titled studio album → from her fifth and eponymous studio album
  • as the album's second → as the record's second (word rep.)
  • themes of leaving a relationship → themes of ending a relationship
  • from music critics. Majority of the critics complimented → from music critics, with the majority of them complimenting
  • songs composition → song's composition
  • top twenty → top 20
  • However, it was certified → Additionally, it was certified
  • Unlink "music video" as it's a pretty common term
  • and the narrative was loosely inspired by the film → with its plot being inspired by
  • Minogue portraying the titular character → Minogue impersonating the titular character
  • spaceship, whilst getting → spaceship while getting undressed

Infobox

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  • CD1 cover. → Cover artwork used to commercialize physical editions of the single.

Background and composition

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  • fifth self-titled studio album → fifth and eponymous studio album
  • career, he noted → career, noted
  • was one of Minogue's most personal → was one of the singer's most personal
  • ballad-inspired track → ballad-inspired recording (word rep.)
  • Denning, and Hunter Felt → remove comma
  • Chris True at → Chris True of AllMusic
  • vocals span between the notes B♭3 and D5 → vocals span from B♭3 to D5
  • Julie Aspinall, who had written an biography about Minogue, stated → The fact that she's written a biography about the singer is not needed here; please remove
  • Audio sample > A sample of Kylie Minogue's single "Put Yourself in My Place", which has been described → A 37-second sample of "Put Yourself in My Place", a song described

Release

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  • were released in the UK → were made available in the United Kingdom
  • Add year of release to "Confide in Me" and "Where Is The Feeling?"
  • were published in the UK; one featured → were made available in the United Kingdom, with one of them featuring
  • The cassette tape was issued in the UK, which featured → A cassette tape issued in that same territory featured
  • were by British → were photographs by British
  • which featured Minogue → and featured Minogue
  • with headphones on → Remove "on"
  • on; according to Minogue's → on. According to the singer's
  • he felt the shots → remove "he felt"
  • you could add a "Release history" section to the article, as you always do

Critical response

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  • was one of the album's "finest" songs → do you mean the compilation or her studio album here?
  • commented that, "'Put → remove comma
  • parent album, but noted → parent album, and noted
  • "ballad" → remove ""
  • June 2016; Rogers complimented the production and said "The second → June 2016 alongside complimenting the production and confessing, "The second

Commercial performance

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  • top twenty → top 20
  • longest charting single at the time → longest-charting singles at that time
  • The single was certified Gold → "Put Yourself in My Place" was certified Gold
  • top 10 → top ten
  • and spent a total of 9 weeks inside the top 100 chart, thus making it one of Minogue's longest charting singles in that region as well, upon its release. → and remained a nine editions inside the chart as one of the singer's longest-spanning recordings in that territory.
  • during the chart week of 6 February → during the week ending 6 February
  • 1995. It peaked at number 86 on its second week, and stayed in the top 100 for four weeks. → 1995, and peaked at number 86 in its second week alongside staying four editions in the chart.

Music video

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  • Unlink "music video"
  • and the narrative was loosely inspired by the film → and its plot was inspired by
  • she stated that she had been a "massive" fan → remove "she stated that" + she is a "massive" fan
  • the film's lead actress → the movie's lead actress (word rep.)
  • and wires; majority of the shooting → and wires; the majority of the shooting
  • Minogue commented in her 2002 book → The singer commented in her 2002 book
  • Minogue also complained → Minogue further complained
  • nineteen hours → 19 hours
  • on both days → on both filming days
  • Minogue's characteristics in the video → You have already said "video "before; alternate here with "visual"
  • which included a large staff that help with styling, hair, and make-up → for which a large staff that helped with styling, hair styling and make-up was required.
  • I prefer editing the synopsis by myself before passing.
  • sexual appeal in the video → you've already used "video before"; use "clip" here
  • analysed the video more → further analysed the video
  • art... She → art [...] She
  • labelled the video "cheeky" → labelled the visual "cheeky"
  • won the award for the single in the Best Video → won the award for Best Video
  • has cited the video → has cited the clip
  • favourites.[7][15][4] → put refs in right order

Live performances and other uses

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  • Title of the section > Live performances and other usage
  • performed a some of → performed on some of
  • concert tour, which appeared on the opening segment. → concert tour in the opening segment
  • An acoustic version was performed as one of the opening tracks to her 2001 → This version was sung as one of the opening tracks of her 2001
  • which also featured the titular track, "Confide in Me", "Finer Feelings", and "Dangerous Game" → Remove comma before enumeration and "titular track"
  • The Driza-Bon remix appeared on her → The Driza-Bon remix was included on her
  • had covered → has covered

Formats and track listings

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  • Australian and UK CD 1 → Australian/British CD 1
  • Australian and UK CD 2 → Australian/British CD 2
  • UK 12" vinyl 1 → British 12" vinyl 1
  • UK 12" vinyl 2 → British 12" vinyl 2
  • Unlink "Where Is The Feeling?"

Credits and personnel

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  • Credits adapted from the CD liner notes of Kylie Minogue: → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Kylie Minogue.
  • Unlink every name here

Charts

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  • why don't you use automatic chart tables for the charts?

Certifications

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  • Add this as a subsection to "Charts and certifications"

Other stuff

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Copy-violation

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Images and others

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  • Audio sample is way too long. Please upload another one which has audio limited to under 25 seconds
  • Image from the music video adds nothing to the article. Please add an image from the film instead and remove the actual one.
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References

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  • It's not "Hung Median", but "Hung Medien"
  • Australian-charts.com → Australian Charts
  • As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article.
  • 1 dead link out here! Please fix!
Good job with this!  On hold! Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:20, 10 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
@Cartoon network freak: all done! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:01, 18 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 11:21, 18 December 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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