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Reviewer: AryKun (talk · contribs) 16:40, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks! Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:32, 18 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed
  • Some duplinks according to the tool.
  • The only ones I see are in image captions, which is considered acceptable (once in text, once in caption).
  • "Scholars including psychoanalysts have" Commas
  • Added.
  • "stories of" Maybe "about" instead?
  • Done.
  • "Guide figures" Why the capital G?
  • Removed.
  • "On Klein's theory" and "On Vygotsky's theory" isn't "in xyz's theory" a more common construction?
  • Done.
  • "Gollum as Devouring Mother" This was mentioned in the table earlier, but you could add a gloss explaining it here as well.
  • Glossed.
  • The images are all licensed and used correctly.
  • Noted.
  • The references are all reliable and formatted correctly.
  • Spotchecks:
    • Flieger, Verlyn (1996). "Tolkien's Experiment with Time: The Lost Road, The Notion Club Papersand J.W. Dunne". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
    • Matthews, Dorothy (1975). "The Psychological Journey of Bilbo Baggins". In Lobdell, Jared (ed.). A Tolkien Compass. Verifies all claims made.
    • Harl, Allison (2007). "The monstrosity of the gaze: critical problems with a film adaptation of The Lord of the Rings". Mythlore. Verifies all claims made.
    • Grant, Patrick (1973). "Tolkien: Archetype and Word". Cross Currents (Winter 1973). Verifies all claims made.
  • Noted.
You're not wrong. 84.216.129.214 (talk) 10:21, 30 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]