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GA Review

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Passed. Arconning (talk) 03:06, 2 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: Nascar9919 (talk · contribs) 03:08, 2 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 03:20, 20 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Nascar9919 Here are my short comments, I probably won't be able to promote it as soon as possible as I'm going on a trip. I'll try to promote it as soon as I can once I get back home! Arconning (talk) 14:28, 24 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Arconning: Hey there! Got around to your comments. No worries about the wait; I understand it's the holidays, after all. Cheers! Nascar9919 (he/him • t • c) 02:39, 25 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Will review in a few days^

Prose and MoS

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Lead and infobox

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  • The mention of the song being a sleeper hit alongside the other songs could be included in the commercial performance section.
  • Probably mention the song being a synth-pop song in the composition section so that the source could be omitted in the infobox.
  • Could clarify that Amstutz is Roan using parentheses.
  • Not done. I thought using the names used in the songwriters section and then wikilinking them was how it was done? See Hot to Go! as an example.

Background and composition

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  • No issues here.

Writing and release

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Critical reception

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  • No issues here.

Live performances

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  • The song has also been featured on the online video concert series NPR Tiny Desk., could this sentence be rewritten as I don't think I've heard mentions of NPR's Tiny Desk Concerts written as such.

Commercial performances

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  • both the Recorded Music NZ, correct me if I'm wrong but shouldn't it be without the "the"?

Charts, certifications, and Release history

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  • No issues.

Media

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  • Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.
  • Captions are suitable.

Refs

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  • Earwig mostly picks up quotes.
  • Random ref check: 1, 7, 14, 21, 24, 38, 45. All good and reliable, cites the information written.

Misc

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  • No ongoing edit war, pretty neutral on the writing, broad enough information relating to the topic.
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