Talk:Pig Bride/GA2
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
I'll give this a review. Wizardman 02:15, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Just a note: Talk:Pig Bride/GA1 exists, but I got to the fixes too late for re-review. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:23, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
Duly noted on the above, looks like everything was addressed there. Here are the issues I found:
- ""Pig Bride" - a young blonde girl who hides her supposedly disfigured face under a pig's—face mask." the dashes there don't seem right. I'd remove the second one and replace the first with a comma.
- "and the entire series was reviewed in negatively by" rm in
- Si-Joon and Si Joon are used interchangably; keep it consistent (I'm fairly certain that with the hyphen is correct). Check the other names as well, since I see others that vary.
- "before arriving the chosen mask," arriving at the
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 02:26, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Wizardman Yes, there were a few other issues with the hyphens which I fixed. Should be resolved now. Consistency in naming usage is always good! ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:48, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman 03:33, 20 February 2015 (UTC)
- Wizardman Yes, there were a few other issues with the hyphens which I fixed. Should be resolved now. Consistency in naming usage is always good! ChrisGualtieri (talk) 02:48, 20 February 2015 (UTC)