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Edit request
Sailing career When Coleman was 18, he entered Olympic Class sailing competitions in the Soling Class, and competed in Olympic trials in 1976. In college, Coleman sailed for the State University of New York Maritime College, and is one of the few to earn All-American honorable mention in two distinct sports; sailing, and swimming. Since then, Coleman has competed in many world class events such as the J/24, Soling and Etchells classes.[3] Coleman is a North American Champion who narrowly missed qualifying for the Olympics. Coming back in 1983 with his brother Peter Coleman, they competed in the United States Sailing North American Championship at the Mallory Cup[4] winning the gold medal. Teaming up with brother Gerard Coleman in 1992, (Team Coleman) won the Gold Medal in the Olympic Soling class US National Championship, and the Silver Medal for the United States in the 1994 Olympic Soling class at the North American Championship, and were asked to join the US Sailing Team to represent the United States in the 1995 Pre-Olympic Regatta in Savanah Georgia. Paulcoleman (talk) 23:05, 30 January 2018 (UTC) Onel5969 TT me 23:51, 30 January 2018 (UTC) Edit request
Please add that attached picture. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:TeamColeman1.jpg --Paulcoleman (talk) 21:18, 7 February 2018 (UTC) ReplyNo action. The article is about a person, while the picture is of five sailboats. The fact that the subject is a sailor is secondary to the fact that they are a person. The two choices should either be (1) a picture of the subject's person, or (2) a picture of the subject's person clearly visible on a sailboat. Regards, Spintendo ᔦᔭ 03:09, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Edit request
Please add that attached picture. https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:PaulColeman1.jpg --148.77.75.34 (talk) 15:14, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Reply 08-FEB-2018A sailor notable enough to be on Wikipedia, and that's the best picture we can do? I'm sorry but this looks like a 15 year old check cashing ID. I'm leaving this one open for other editors to comment. Spintendo ᔦᔭ 16:15, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Edit requestKindly note, the response on <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Paul_Coleman_(sailor)> recommended an upgrade for the picture of the subject's person notable for Wikipedia quality. Thank you for your reply. This is very much appreciated. Your comments and recommendations most welcome. I will submit request with better picture of subject's person. Sincerely yours, Paul — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 18:18, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Edit requestMy apologies! The response on <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Talk:Paul_Coleman_(sailor)> recommended an upgrade for the picture of the subject's person notable for Wikipedia quality. Thank you for your reply. This is very much appreciated. Your comments and recommendations most welcome. I will submit request with better picture of subject's person. Sincerely yours, Paul — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 18:22, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Edit requestMy sincere apology! The recent reply to my application suggested upgrading the picture of subject's person. Thank you for your response. This is very much appreciated. Your comments and recommendations are truly welcome. Kindly note, I sailed with both Ted Turner and Dennis Connor. I appeared many of the same championships with them -and we are all members of the same Yacht Club. As such, I will provide a picture notable for Wikipedia excellence. Yours truly, Paul — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 18:53, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Edit request
Dear Larry, Thank you for your response. This is very much appreciated. Your comments and recommendations are truly welcome. My sincere apology! The recent reply to my application suggested upgrading the picture. It is well to note that I won numerous sailing championship medals competing against many of the World-Class sailors referenced in many of Wikipedia's excellent articles. Attached please find a picture which I am optimistic will meet Wikipedia’s principles of quality. I very much appreciate your contribution. I hope this meets your approval. I am more than happy to follow your direction. Yours truly, Paul https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Paul_Coleman01.jpg --Paulcoleman (talk) 22:47, 8 February 2018 (UTC) Edit request
Dear Larry, Thank you for your reply. This is very much valued. Your explanations and references are justly wanted. Larry, this is my honest confession! The current answer to my submission recommended progress to improve the portrait. As I’m sure you know, I won many frequent sailing competition medals rivaling many of the World-Class sailors referenced in many of Wikipedia's outstanding articles. As requested, attached please find a new picture which I am hopeful will meet Wikipedia’s doctrines of excellence. I very much appreciate your involvement. I hope this meets your consent. I am more than pleased to follow your direction. Yours truly, Paul https://commons.wikimedia.org/wiki/File:Paul_Coleman01.jpg --Paulcoleman (talk) 23:57, 8 February 2018 (UTC)
Dear Wikipedia Volunteer Response Team, Thank you for the fantastic job you have been doing. Your hard work and dedication has really helped us during a significant growth period for Wikipedia. I just wanted to make sure you know how much you are valued and appreciated. Not only do you complete excellent quality work, but also pitch in to get things done. Furthermore, you do this all with a fantastic attitude. Thank you for your hard work and dedication. We really appreciate all that you do. Your comments and recommendations are truly welcome. My honest apology! The current response to my submission recommended upgrading the photograph. It is well to note that I won various sailing championship medals contending alongside many of the World-Class sailors referenced in countless Wikipedia's excellent articles. Attached please find a picture which I am hopeful will meet Wikipedia’s standards of excellence. I very much appreciate your contribution. Please let me know if this meets your endorsement, or if I should locate it in an improved subdivision. I am more than pleased to follow your guidance. Yours truly, Paul
148.77.75.34 (talk) 17:34, 9 February 2018 (UTC) Dear Wikipedia Volunteer Response Team, Thank you for the magnificent work you are undertaking. Your solid effort and commitment has indeed aided us during a noteworthy growing period for Wikipedia. I would like to make certain you recognize how much you are respected and appreciated. Not only do you complete exceptional quality work, but also pitch in to get things done. Additionally, you do this all with a grace and dignity. Thank you for your hard work and devotion. We truly appreciate all that you do. Your explanations and references are justly welcome. My truthful request for forgiveness! This is a possible duplicate request. I do not see anything actionable completed here yet. I don't believe that was completed. Kindly note, the present reply to my proposal suggested progress made on the photo. It is well to note that I attained numerous sailing championship medals contending together with many of the World-Class sailors referenced in innumerable outstanding Wikipedia articles. Attached please find a photograph which I am encouraged will meet Wikipedia’s standards of distinction. I very much appreciate your input. Please let me know if this meets your approval. On the other hand, is the photo better situated in a position located in a more prominent section? I am more than delighted to follow your guidance. Yours truly, Paul {{edit COI}}
148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:47, 9 February 2018 (UTC) Edit requestCould you please do me a favor? I was rereading the article page with my colleagues and family, and somebody inquired about an orange circle. This orange circle noticeably located at the top of the page, with an interesting exclamation mark (!) located in the center. I know it might sound finicky, but my contemporaries requested I look into possibly trying to have this dimple cosmetically removed. I know you are the most capable person for the task. Do you know if it possible to have this slight blemish aesthetically cleaned up? Please let me know if you can assist. I look forward to hearing from you. I hope to return the favor sometime. Please delete the following: {{edit COI}}
148.77.75.34 (talk) 22:53, 9 February 2018 (UTC) Edit requestHi there, My name is Paul Coleman. I am interested in improving this page. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so in lieu of editing myself, I’m posting here to find another editor to help. I’ve also posted the required disclosure at the top of the page—let me know if you have questions about my intentions/efforts here. I’ve already drafted an updated article for consideration—take a look here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m proposing, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. My primary objective is to provide more detail about my medals, since there is quite a bit of material out there that is not presently revealed in this entry. I made sure to acquaint myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know. In specific, I’d love to help making sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and enthusiastic to work with the community to contribute to the mission. Thank you in advance for your help! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 00:42, 10 February 2018 (UTC) Edit requestDear Wikipedia Volunteer Response Team, I am interested in improving this page. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so in lieu of editing myself, I’m posting here to find another editor to help. As clarified elsewhere, my colleagues are asking, respectfully, that users edit the article for reliable sourcing and encyclopedic relevance - so that the tag boxes at the top can be removed in an appropriate manner. Please let me know if you can assist. Guidelines in Wikipedia:Verifiability#Access to sources may also be of use in evaluating older references, of which I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see original printed material. I’ve also posted the required disclosure at the top of the page—let me know if you have questions about my intentions/efforts here. I’ve already drafted an updated article for consideration—take a look here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m proposing, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. My primary objective is to provide more detail about my medals, since there is quite a bit of material out there that is not presently revealed in this entry. I made sure to acquaint myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know. In specific, I’d love to help making sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and enthusiastic to work with the community to contribute to the mission. Thank you for any valuable attention! Yours truly, Paul Coleman ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Edit request Please delete the following: {{edit COI}}
148.77.75.34 (talk) 02:45, 10 February 2018 (UTC) Reply 09-FEB-2018
Edit requestDear Photo Submission Department, I am interested in improving this page. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so in lieu of editing myself, I’m posting here to find another editor to help. As elucidate here, my research colleagues are asking, respectfully, that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. From this prospective, and following the guiding principles outlined in "Wikipedia:Contact us – Licensing", aattached below you may find a photo that may be added to the article in the appropriate manner. Take a look! Kindly note, I have accessed researched in detail the Wikipedia proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material. As such, I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. In addition, I have also posted the required disclosure at the top of the page. Please let me know if you have questions about my purpose and efforts here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. Because there is quite a bit of material out there that is not currently revealed in this entry, my principal objective is to provide more original source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources. If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know. In specific, I’d love to help making sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and excited to work with the community to contribute to the Wikipedia mission. Please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration! Sincerely yours, Paul J. Coleman ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Edit request Please add the following original source photograph:
148.77.75.34 (talk) 18:02, 12 February 2018 (UTC) Did you email this to the address I gave you for OTRS? Spintendo ᔦᔭ 18:22, 12 February 2018 (UTC) |
Edit request
Dear Photo Submission Department,
Yes! I sent the source material to the email address provided for OTRSI. Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. I’d love to help make sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and excited to work with the community to contribute to the Wikipedia mission. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here (with copy to the Photo Submission Departments email) in hopes to find another editor to help. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my research colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the photo that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. Kindly note, I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material.
Please let me know if you have questions about my purpose and efforts here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. Because there is quite a bit of material out there that is not currently revealed in this entry, my principal objective is to provide more original source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources.
If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration!
Sincerely yours,
Paul J. Coleman
Reply
Please wait for OTRS, whom you've contacted, to contact you. Until you hear from them, there is no need to place additional edit request templates on this talk page. Thank you
Regards, Spintendo 00:45, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
Hello Spintendo, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 19:37, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
Preferably, I’d love to see a veteran editor review the attached, give an opinion - and, if the draft appears to be in respectable form, move this new material to the living article.
Cheers -
Please add the attached photo! Pcolemancup1.jpg 148.77.75.34 (talk) 19:36, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
thank you
Dear Esteemed Wikipedia Volunteer Response Team,
I sincerely apologize for this duplicate request. I am very interested in working with Open-source Ticket Request System (OTRS). I would like to contribute to the Wikipedia mission, and respectfully request an editor’s input to improve the draft of this article.
Thank you for your most valued contribution!
Yours truly,
Paul Coleman — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 15:21, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
Edit request
Dear Fellow Wikipedia Contributors,
Please let me know what I can do to improve this page. I’d love to help make sure these concepts related to Wikipedia are detailed as simply as possible while remaining comprehensive and precise. I’m very open to collaboration and excited to work with the community to contribute to the Wikipedia mission. I understand that my position creates a conflict of interest, so, in lieu of editing myself, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. From this prospective, following the guiding principles outlined for the proper procedures in evaluating donating one’s own source material, my research colleagues are asking (respectfully) that users edit the article for reliable tracking and encyclopedic relevance. As such, I have attached the "edit request" that may be added to the article as the editor deems the appropriate manner. Kindly note, I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material.
Please let me know if you have questions about my purpose and efforts here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. Because there is quite a bit of material out there that is not currently revealed in this entry, my principal objective is to provide more original source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources.
If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration!
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest has now been answered. |
please add the following to article:
| height = 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m) | weight = 163 lb (74 kg) Paulcoleman (talk) 20:12, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
Implemented Spintendo 21:41, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
- Surely we need a source for this, Spintendo? Cordless Larry (talk) 21:46, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
- The question becomes how much of a reference is the photgraph with respect to a claimed weight and height. Meaning, how far off can this height and weight be from what's evident in the picture? Granted, its an older picture with no in-frame reference for comparison, but the picture provided certainly doesn't show someone who weighs 300 lbs, so the claim — if incorrect — is not grossly incorrect. I had thought that the COI editor was going to send these documents to OTRS, and had advised them on this. However, the frequency of requests and the inclination to repeat the contents of past-reviewed proposals without awareness to their prior instances raises questions over how much of these suggestions are immediately cognizable by the editor himself. Spintendo 22:07, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- The only verification we would accept at OTRS would be published sources that could be cited in the article. Private information submitted to OTRS isn't an alternative to published sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 22:27, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input. The process of OTRS includes the desemination of information from sent queries, acting
"as a point of contact for third parties unfamiliar with Wikipedia's editing process, who wish to notify Wikipedia about an article error or concern."
As the COI editor appears at times to be recalcitrant towards informational suggestions offered in this forum, the OTRS provides an excellent alternative for their "exceptional" needs. Perhaps you could shed some light on why this particular weight and height parameter is active in this particular infobox, and what proof is commonly accepted in other articles which feature this parameter? Please advise. Spintendo 00:21, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for your input. The process of OTRS includes the desemination of information from sent queries, acting
- The only verification we would accept at OTRS would be published sources that could be cited in the article. Private information submitted to OTRS isn't an alternative to published sources. Cordless Larry (talk) 22:27, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- The question becomes how much of a reference is the photgraph with respect to a claimed weight and height. Meaning, how far off can this height and weight be from what's evident in the picture? Granted, its an older picture with no in-frame reference for comparison, but the picture provided certainly doesn't show someone who weighs 300 lbs, so the claim — if incorrect — is not grossly incorrect. I had thought that the COI editor was going to send these documents to OTRS, and had advised them on this. However, the frequency of requests and the inclination to repeat the contents of past-reviewed proposals without awareness to their prior instances raises questions over how much of these suggestions are immediately cognizable by the editor himself. Spintendo 22:07, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
US or North American Championships?
Should the Clifford Day Mallory Cup that Coleman won in 1983 be properly described as the United States Adult Sailing Championship or the North American Championships? US Sailing refer to it as the former, which seems pretty authoritative, but contemporary sources such as this call it the North American Men's Sailing Championships. Has the event been reclassified since 1983, or is there some other explanation? Does anyone know? Cordless Larry (talk) 21:52, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
Dear Fellow Wikipedians,
I am open to collaborative work in contributing to Wikipedia. I understand my position poses a potential conflict of interest. Therefore, I have posted it here in hopes to find another editor to help. I tried to uphold an impartial point of view by using only published sources. Please note, I can e-mail scanned supplemental original source material referencing this as the North American Championships. Thank you for your valued consideration.
Sincerely yours, — Preceding unsigned comment added by Paulcoleman (talk • contribs) 22:52, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, I'm aware that contemporary sources use that term, as I explained above. What I want to understand is why the US Sailing site now uses the name United States Adult Sailing Championship. Cordless Larry (talk) 12:01, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
supplementary original reference material for review
I am delighted to send supplementary original reference materials. These resources showcase this prominent event as the North American Championships. Thank you for your esteemed reflection. Sincerely yours, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 15:52, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
additional source citation materials
I am pleased to provide additional source citation materials. These resources showcase this prominent tournament as the North American Championships. I would like to thank you for your valued assessment, and professional guidance, in posting "new source material" references citing the Mallory Cup as the North American Championships. Your contribution is very much respected to progress the article. Thus, I am providing supplementary corroborating excerpts for your review.
Thank you for the superb work Wikipedia is undertaking.
Yours truly, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:00, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
Historic archives document “Mallory Cup” as North American Championships
Thank you for your very much appreciated evaluation. I am delighted to offer further supplementary verifying source reference resources for your analysis.
Historic documents show the event has always been open to Canadians. These resources document the US Sailing Association (USSA) history. Specially, the USSA origins date back to the founding of The North American Yacht Racing Union (NAYRU) in 1897. These archives document the “Mallory Cup” donated by Clifford D. Mallory. In particular, Clifford D. Mallory was Commodore of Indian Harbor Yacht Club, and head of NAYRU. In 1975, NAYRU changed its name to the United States Yacht Racing Union (USYRU), and in 1991 USYRU change its name to the United States Sailing Association (USSA). Through these name changes, NAYRU’s originally organized 12 qualifying areas for the Mallory Cup remained the same. These qualifying areas are denoted by letters. Canadians are included in qualifying areas within E, K and L. Therefore, Canadians that are members of the USSA, many apply through their regional Canadian Yachting Association (CYA) from these areas. This applies to all North American counties. For this reason; historians documenting this affair showcase this prominent regatta citing the Mallory Cup as the North American Championships.
Please let me know if I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. Your input is very much appreciated to improve, and move this new material to the live article. Thank you for the fabulous work Wikipedia is undertaking.
Yours truly, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 23:47, 21 February 2018 (UTC)
- It would be helpful if you would add comments to existing sections rather than starting a new section to reply, and also if you would leave out all the "Thank you for the fabulous work Wikipedia is undertaking" praise, which is unnecessary. I realise that some sources refer to the cup as the North American Championships, but want to know why and when US Sailing started to refer to it as the United States Championships. Cordless Larry (talk) 11:02, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
Is this where the reply will be more accommodating? Should the reply be located here? Is this location better to progress with the explanations to an existing portion? Is this the best place to reply, rather than beginning a new subdivision?
Yours truly, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 15:31, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, this is the place to reply to comments posted in this section. Cordless Larry (talk) 20:52, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
Perfect! Thank you for your kind response. This is very helpful.
Warmest regards, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:10, 22 February 2018 (UTC)
certifications
Hello fellow Wikipedians,
Please take a moment for this review. I have objectively studied the request for outside certifications required on revision history page. Kindly offer feedback that will help to integrate the update to bring this live on the article page. If would like, I am happy to email scanned citations for other editors review. When you have finished reviewing my suggested changes, you may reply at your convenience to help me improve this article.
Cheers —
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. |
please add the following to article:
| height = 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m) | weight = 163 lb (74 kg)
148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:04, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
Reply
Send your proof to OTRS. Spintendo 21:23, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
To integrate proof of the updated information, and bring this live on the article page, to which email address would I send scanned citations for editors review?
Sincerely yours, — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:36, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
- The OTRS email address for issues regarding an article that is written about you is info-en-q@wikimedia.org
- Regards, Spintendo 15:31, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
- The OTRS email address for issues regarding an article that is written about you is info-en-q@wikimedia.org
Edit request
Dear Photo Submission Department,
The attached photo may be added to article as editor deems appropriate. I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who would like supplemental source material. Please let me know if you have questions. I’d like someone to review the draft, and move this new material to the live article. Thank you for your valued consideration!
Respectfully,
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. A reviewer felt that this edit would not improve the article. |
Please add the follow original photo. TeamColeman1.jpg 148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:30, 23 February 2018 (UTC)
Reply
Declined The pictures do not specify why these sailboats are germane to the subject. Who's sailboats they are is not clear or not readily apparent. This needs to be shown in photographs for them to be appropriate. For example, the Aircraft pilot article, whose topic concerns a person, does not feature any photos of aircraft that do not also readily show a pilot or pilots operating them. As I've said before, photos of the subject sailing a sailboat need to easily and readily show the subject operating, or at least standing on, a sailboat — much as they are doing in the already approved picture used in the article. Spintendo 15:46, 24 February 2018 (UTC)
external links
I have just added 3 external links. Please take a minute to review my edit appeal. If you have any requests, or need supplementary data in total, I am delighted to offer. • Added archive http://articles.courant.com/1996-05-13/sports/9605130069_1_dnc-pms-coral-gables • Added archive http://www.etchells.org/racing/race-1-trophy • Added archive http://www.manhassetbayyc.org/Default.aspx?p=DynamicModule&pageid=322255&ssid=215359&vnf=1 Once you have completed reviewing my suggested incorporation, you may follow-up with recommendations at your convenience. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 19:48, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
North American Championships
The America's Cup is an international event. However, the America’s Cup is not America's cup. In the same way, the Mallory Cup, although run by US Sailing, is open to anyone in North America to participate. Consequently, the Mallory Cup is a North American Championship. Please see attached PDF documenting this prestigious regatta as the North American Championships. Moreover, historians documenting this affair showcase this significant event citing the Mallory Cup as the North American Championships.
Numerous supplemental documents verify the event has always been open to Canadians. These resources verify the US Sailing Association (USSA) history. Specially, the USSA origins date back to the founding of The North American Yacht Racing Union (NAYRU) in 1897. These archives document the “Mallory Cup” donated by Clifford D. Mallory. In particular, Clifford D. Mallory was Commodore of Indian Harbor Yacht Club, and head of NAYRU. In 1975, NAYRU changed its name to the United States Yacht Racing Union (USYRU), and in 1991 USYRU change its name to the United States Sailing Association (USSA). Through these name changes, NAYRU’s originally organized 12 qualifying areas for the Mallory Cup remained the same. These qualifying areas are denoted by letters. Canadians are included in qualifying areas within E, H, K and L. Yachtsman competed for North American Sailing Chairmanships' Mallory Cup since 1952. Sailors form different areas in North America compete for the opportunity to represent their district. Canadians that are members of the USSA, may apply through their regional Canadian Yachting Association (CYA). For example, the attached results document Ken Scott representing the Royal Vancouver Yacht Club from Vancouver, BC. This applies to this day for sailors from all North American counties who are members of USSA competing for the Mallory Cup.
Please let me know if I can e-mail scanned copies to anyone who might want to see supplemental original source material. Your input is very much appreciated to improve, and move this new material to the live article.
This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Some or all of the changes weren't supported by neutral, independent, reliable sources. Consider re-submitting with content based on media, books and scholarly works. |
Please change the following - Old: |- ! colspan="3" style="text-align:center;vertical-align:middle;background-color:#cccccc;color:inherit;" | United States Sailing Championship New: |- ! colspan="3" style="text-align:center;vertical-align:middle;background-color:#cccccc;color:inherit;" | North American Championship 148.77.75.34 (talk) 21:46, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
Declined Unreferenced. Spintendo 00:06, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
Please let me know if you have questions about my purpose and efforts here. Ideally, I’d like someone to review what I’m suggesting, give feedback, and, once the draft is in good shape, move the new material to the live article. Because there is quite a bit of material out there that is not currently revealed in this entry, my principal objective is to provide more original source detail. I made sure to familiarize myself with Wikipedia's content policies before writing, and I tried to uphold an impartial point of view and use only certifiable, published sources.
If there are areas where editors think I can improve, please let me know if you can assist with this. Thank you for your valued consideration! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 148.77.75.34 (talk) 00:49, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
Good morning Spintendo,
Thank you for providing the new suggestions. They certainly make viewing the information much more clear. Are the extensive references given for my articles good? I have just modified request for the article. Please take a moment to review my edit. If you have any questions, or need more information, the I am happy to collaborate with volunteer managing editors to work in contributing to the Wikipedia process. I appreciate my place, and understand it may pose a possible engagement of mutual interest. Therefore, I have posted it here in hopes to find additional editors assistance. I would like to uphold an impartial point of view by using only published sources. Please note, I can e-mail scanned complementary creative new quantifiable data referencing this data. Please explain to my talk! Thank you for your most valued consideration.
Cheers —
please add the following to article:
| height = 6 ft 1 in (1.85 m) | weight = 163 lb (74 kg)
148.77.75.34 (talk) 14:24, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
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