Talk:Patrick Henry Cronin/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 00:25, 14 January 2018 (UTC)

Starting this GAR. Hope to be done within a week. Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 00:25, 14 January 2018 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

• Per WP:LEDE, I'd expect a GA lede to be A) longer, and B)slightly better written. i.e. there should be a lifespan after the name. It should be at least two paragraphs, and go slightly more in depth.

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions): y

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

MidwestCuttlefish I'm Willing to approve the article pending fixing of the lede issue. Great job Eddie891 ^Talk _Work 00:51, 19 January 2018 (UTC)

Eddie891 I expanded the lede. Let me know if that's sufficient. Thank you! MidwestCuttlefish (talk) 22:49, 19 January 2018 (UTC)