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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:10, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi! Will review this. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:10, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Well-written article. Only a few points to make: Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:25, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  • Description
Sorry, did not notice. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
As you like. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Services
  • Great Western Railway who operate most I think "who" should be "that" and the Railway should be considered a single unit, and thus it should be said "operates".
    Sorted. -mattbuck (Talk) 17:43, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Several duplicate links: London Paddington, Filton Abbey Wood, South Wales Main Line, Bristol Parkway, Pilning.
    Regarding duplicate links, it's always been my opinion that there should be no duplicates within level 2 headings, but that having the same link in several sections should be ok on the grounds that people don't always read the entire article, especially when it's a long one. -mattbuck (Talk) 10:00, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I see your point. Alright, duplinks can be kept if they are necessary. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:08, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • History
  • More duplinks: Bristol Temple Meads, River Severn, Pilning, South Wales Main Line, Henbury Loop Line, South Gloucestershire, Great Western Railway, Arriva CrossCountry, Manchester Piccadilly.
  • and few details about it survive I think "remain" would be better than "survive"
    I'm not sure remain implies quite the same thing. I've reworded it to very little else is known about it. -mattbuck (Talk) 16:45, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Fine. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Perhaps link gradient? I am not familiar with this term here, so could not get it. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
That's done now. -mattbuck (Talk) 17:11, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Fine. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
  • Future
  • Duplinks:Greater Western passenger franchise, impending upgrade to the Great Western Main Line, CrossCountry
  • Citations
OK. Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:50, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

That should be all. These done, I would be glad to promote this. Good luck! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 16:25, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I believe all the issues have now been addressed. This article is ready for promotion. Great job! Sainsf <^>Feel at home 06:08, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thankyou very much! -mattbuck (Talk) 07:34, 1 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]