Talk:Pakistan at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)

• Wikilink Federation Internationale de Ski
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Controversy section could be folded into the background one, since now it appears last after we already know they did compete.
  • Good idea, done Kees08 (Talk)
• "sending one male to compete in the giant slalom" Male strikes me as a strange word choice here.
  • Reworded Kees08 (Talk)
• "He had less than the maximum 140 points needed to qualify," Which he is meant here?
  • Clarified (though, technically both of them). Kees08 (Talk)
• Speaking of the above, if "he" didn't qualify, how did he, well, qualify if Pakistan had three who qualified?
  • Not sure if I cleared it up, but I added more information on the qualification. Kees08 (Talk)
• Your EL needs a new description, it is the IOC's page on Pakistan generally, not on just 2014.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Nothing major. Courcelles (talk) 00:54, 23 July 2018 (UTC)

• Qualification makes more sense now. Passing. Courcelles (talk) 14:37, 24 July 2018 (UTC)