Talk:Pakistan at the 2014 Winter Olympics
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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
Will review tonight. Courcelles (talk) 16:13, 22 July 2018 (UTC)
- Wikilink Federation Internationale de Ski
- Controversy section could be folded into the background one, since now it appears last after we already know they did compete.
- "sending one male to compete in the giant slalom" Male strikes me as a strange word choice here.
- "He had less than the maximum 140 points needed to qualify," Which he is meant here?
- Speaking of the above, if "he" didn't qualify, how did he, well, qualify if Pakistan had three who qualified?
- Your EL needs a new description, it is the IOC's page on Pakistan generally, not on just 2014.
Nothing major. Courcelles (talk) 00:54, 23 July 2018 (UTC)
- Qualification makes more sense now. Passing. Courcelles (talk) 14:37, 24 July 2018 (UTC)