Talk:Pakistan at the 2010 Winter Olympics
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Pakistan at the 2010 Winter Olympics has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: July 12, 2018. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Pakistan at the 2010 Winter Olympics/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:31, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
Will read this article and leave comments. MWright96 (talk) 08:31, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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Lead
[edit]- "He was also the country's opening and closing ceremonies flag bearer." - change to Abbas was also the country's flag bearer in the opening and closing ceremonies.
Background
[edit]- Wikilink Naltar Valley and Ski Federation of Pakistan
- Link 1948 Games to 1948 Summer Olympics
- Wikilink the word opening to 2010 Winter Olympics opening ceremony and closing ceremonies to 2010 Winter Olympics closing ceremony; also the same needs to be done in the lead
Alpine skiing
[edit]- "He trained for two weeks in 2008 and six weeks in 2009 in Austria," - try and six weeks in Austria in 2009
- " since he did not have money to compete in other competitions." - change to contest to avoid close reptition of the same word
- "The event was supposed to start on February 21, but was postponed two days to allow for another event to take place." - source? and which event exactly?
- Added the event and moved the reference closer to the material
- "His total was 3:20.58, for 79th place overall," - total time
References
[edit]- Reference 1 is missing the author who wrote it
- Reference 7's publisher The Star needs to be in the work field
That's all from my side. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 17:38, 11 July 2018 (UTC)
@MWright96: Think I got it all. Kees08 (Talk) 03:40, 12 July 2018 (UTC)
- @Kees08: Good work. Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 08:20, 12 July 2018 (UTC)