Talk:Operation Hardboiled/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 06:50, 23 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll start this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 06:50, 23 January 2013 (UTC)

• I think that moving the date to the end in this sentence will make it read better: Eventually, after several months of pressure, in December 1942 Stanley finally got permission to plan the LCS's first operation.
• Link Dennis Wheatley on first appearance, which is before the quote.
• Why apparently? Apparently Stanley was unimpressed with the codeword picked for the operation.
• This is awkward: Hardboiled was sidelined by the new regime and had entirely died a death by the end of May.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:02, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Thanks; I think I've addressed these points :) --Errant ^(chat!) 15:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)