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Featured articleOperation Boomerang is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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August 19, 2018Good article nomineeListed
July 6, 2020WikiProject A-class reviewApproved
September 26, 2020Featured article candidatePromoted
Current status: Featured article

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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 05:51, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]


This article is in good shape. Just a few minor comments from me:

That's me done, nice job. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Cheers, Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:14, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Distance to the Musi

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@Nick-D: Regarding this [1], the problem is not that it is unsourced, but the distinction makes little sense unless we mention the speific point of the Musi we're talking about. Compare to a sentence like this: "The flight from Berlin takes ___ miles to London and ___ miles to the Thames." If the numbers are different it will be confusing to the reader unless we specify we're talking about a point outside London. HaEr48 (talk) 22:25, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good point - I've clarified the text. It looks like the mines were dropped a fair way downriver from Palembang, but the sources are unfortunately vague on where exactly. Thank you for your excellent edits to the article. Nick-D (talk) 22:29, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Nick-D, you're welcome. Your update makes sense and thanks for working on this interesting article! HaEr48 (talk) 23:12, 3 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]