Talk:One Night's Anger/GA1
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:11, 5 May 2020 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Alt needs a better description
- Remove CD from the formats as that wasn't a standalone release
Lead
[edit]- was issued → was first issued
- Hersi → see more on overall
- Add something from the critical reception
Background and composition
[edit]- Fine
Critical reception
[edit]- outspoken → given
Music video and promotion
[edit]- For further promotion, she appeared to perform the song at various radio and television shows → when?
Festivali i Këngës
[edit]- Fine
Copenhagen
[edit]- The image doesn't add anything to the article, so please remove it
- and three accompanied → and was accompanied by three
- On stage, they performed → who is they? Does it include Hersi?
- If the latter is true than the first sentance of this paragraph should merge with the last one
Track listing
[edit]- Fine
Release history
[edit]- Fine
References
[edit]- Refence five is dead
Overall
[edit]- There are several instance on this article you use her first name, you should use her last one "Matmuja".
- Don't address any comments until I say so. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:55, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: Done.--Lorik17 (talk) 15:52, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
- I did some changes see if you are ok with them and let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:46, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
- @MarioSoulTruthFan: Great, thank you alot!--Lorik17 (talk) 18:36, 6 May 2020 (UTC)
- I did some changes see if you are ok with them and let me know. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:46, 6 May 2020 (UTC)