Talk:On the Brink (Spooks)/GA1
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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:18, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
I will review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:18, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- Should the credit crunch link to the 2000s financial crisis, rather than where it's currently linking? I presume that's what was meant but I could be wrong.
- "Lucas eventually recalls the word "Pilgrim" utteres several times." uttered
- "Swinden noted that the traders were "interesting guys" to work with, and told the producers the story was "very close to home."" i'd prefer a cite here due to the double quotes, even though i know the cite is right at the end of the paragraph.
Just those couple issues. i'll put the article on hold and will pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:39, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
- Done, done and done. Thanks for reviewing. -- Matthew RD 12:58, 22 March 2011 (UTC)
- No problem. Everything looks good now, so article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 13:58, 22 March 2011 (UTC)