Talk:Oman at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Taking review MWright96 (talk) 08:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lede
[edit]- Think Oman and the 2016 Summer Olympics and flag bearer can be wikilinked
- Comment: I had removed the ones from Oman and 2016 Summer Olympics per MOS:BOLDLINK / MOS:TITLEABSENTBOLD like your previous review at Laos at the 2012 Summer Olympics. I wikilinked flagbearer. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Fair :) MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Comment: I had removed the ones from Oman and 2016 Summer Olympics per MOS:BOLDLINK / MOS:TITLEABSENTBOLD like your previous review at Laos at the 2012 Summer Olympics. I wikilinked flagbearer. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Opening cermeony can be wikilinked to 2016 Summer Olympics opening ceremony
- Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "Overall, both Al-Harthi and Al-Balushi had the highest placing for Oman with their 26th place finish." - which specific events?
- Clairifed --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Athletics (track & field)
[edit]- Wikilink men's 100 metres to Athletics at the 2016 Summer Olympics – Men's 100 metres
- Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- women's 100 metres should be linked to Athletics at the 2016 Summer Olympics – Women's 100 metres
- Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "qualifying time for the women's 100 metres.[24][18]" - refs in numerical order please
- Comment: Flipped. Does it make sense even though the citations supports the sentence out of order? If you need me to flip the sentence too, let me know. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- It makes sense regardless of whether the citations are out of order or not MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Comment: Flipped. Does it make sense even though the citations supports the sentence out of order? If you need me to flip the sentence too, let me know. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "As Al-Alawi did not finish in the top two of her individual heat, Al-Alawi did not advance with her eighth place finish" - repetition of "Al-Alawi"
- Nice catch! Reworded --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "Al-Alawi did not advance with her eighth place finish." - clarification please
- Comment: Would "did not advance to the next round" work? The next sentence says she did not advance past the heats. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- That will work MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Comment: Would "did not advance to the next round" work? The next sentence says she did not advance past the heats. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Shooting
[edit]- Think the term quota place can be wikilinked to Olympic quota allocation system only on the first mention
- Didn't know about that wikilink! Added. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "Al-Balushi made 381 points and reached her score requirement" - how about acculumated or scored instead?
- Went with accumulated as I used scored with Al-Khatri --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "With his points" - points total or points score
- Good point :P Went with points total --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- "Al-Balushi scored 379 points during qualification at the 10m air pistol event." - think competition can be used instead of the word in bold for variety
- Went with Olympic competition --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Tables
[edit]- Both tables should be MOS:DTT compliant and fully referenced
- Did. Also renamed headers for athletics/updated Al-Harthi --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 20:58, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Works/agencies/publishers should ideally be wikilinked on the first mention only
- Comment: If you're referring to citations 1, 18 and 23, they were already there when I started expanding. I can delink them if it's a better solution. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- By all means MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Comment: If you're referring to citations 1, 18 and 23, they were already there when I started expanding. I can delink them if it's a better solution. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Newspapers titles such as Oman Daily Observer and The Times of Man should be in the works field
- Same issue as above. Though I fixed these instances per cite news template. Also tweaked the IAAF one per cite web template. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Reference 13 "Ready, Aim, Run" is missing the page number
- Ahhh. I did miss it. Added to The Road to Rio |at parameter. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- The same reference should mention it came from Issuu
- Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- Reference 23 "Oman delegation gear up for Rio Olympics" is missing Times News Agency as the agency
- Nice catch! Added --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- The fully-capitalised surnames in References 34, 35 can be done with only the inital letter in a capital letter
- Did. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:06, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
Shall put the review to allow the nominator to address/query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 11:40, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Did most of your list. However, I have some questions I tagged with comments. Also, I renamed the headers for the athletics table and clarified that Al-Harthi didnt race in the prelimenary round to prevent confusion. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 18:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Okay. Let me know if anything else needs to be done, especially with the athletics table and clarification of Al-Harthi not competing in prelimenary. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 21:00, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- @MrLinkinPark333: Now promoting to GA class MWright96 (talk) 21:12, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Okay. Let me know if anything else needs to be done, especially with the athletics table and clarification of Al-Harthi not competing in prelimenary. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 21:00, 14 June 2021 (UTC)