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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Hello, I'll be reviewing this article in the nearby future. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox

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  • On producer: Dennis Herring → Herring

 Done

Lead

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  • them → who?
  • music critics → link to music journalism

 Done

Background and composition

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  • Split both sections into their own.
  • There is no need to use 4 or 5 sources to back up the same thing, three is more than enough.
  • house beat] → house beat
  • Jamie Milton described it as a "gigantic trance chorus",[34] and Dan Reilly → I assume they are music critics for magazines but there is no reference to it.
  • Could add a sound of the song to the composition section, however, not mandatory.

 Done. Noticed the reason for no sample. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:34, 22 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Release and promotion

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  • ""Old Love / New Love" was released by Shadow as single" → The last source contradicts the statement you made, as it only says it was only released as a single for the videogame.
  • No need to use source 41, just copy the Billboard one (number 36) here.

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Critical reception

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  • "According to him, when it happens it is positive, and also added the conclusion is better," → what is positive and negative and why? I don't understand
  • "Alex Young mentioned it was more suitable for the dance clubs than "six-star killing spree." → which publications, magazines they wrote this for?
  • " Gerrit Feenstra noted "Old Love / New Love" as "one of the finest tracks" from it, a feeling Pat Levy" → same as previous
  • "one of the finest tracks" from the it" → "one of the finest tracks" from it
  • "After the release of Eclipse Embling" → After the release of Eclipse, Embling
  • "Ian Gormely considered Shadow created a "sublime catharsis"; Heather Phares lauded its contemporary sound" → missing one source.
  • Jayson Greene labeled it as "sexy" → from Pitchfork
  • Be sure to link every writer to a publication as most of the critics, writer for various magazines.
  • "several music critics graded "Old Love / New Love" as a highlight from Eclipse" → three sources is enough.

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Track listing

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  • Fine.

Credits

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  • Always use small caps to begin the sentence. (Wynne Bennett – Keyboards → Wynne Bennett – keyboards).
  • Use  – (click to copy and edit)

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References

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  • Ref 28 is dead, use the archive by adding "dealurl=yes" to the parameters.
  • The Music Ninja → remove it, doesn't seem like a reliable site.

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  • Add the lyrics from Metrolyrics.
I see the reasoning below, accepted. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:26, 22 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

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