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Nominator: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 18:17, 8 January 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Averageuntitleduser (talk · contribs) 23:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
Hello, I'll be giving this a go! And ugh, those salsa vibes and horns are doing it for me. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 23:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)
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Well-written
[edit]Nothing that a fresh pair of eyes can't bring up to scratch. Feel free to revert my copyedits/tweaks. Of course, lovely work here!
At the New Year's Eve concert in the same year
— which concert? Any specific title or location?In a similar review of the album,
— this sentence is a bit confusing. Is this quote: "how little consequence she is", positive or negative? The conjunction "where" makes an unclear connection; do they believe that Reguiera outperformed her on the remix?It became her Spanish-language
— "first", "second", or some other qualifier seems missing.
Verifiable with no original research
[edit]A lot of prominent Mexican and American newspapers, looks good on a reliability front. Us Weekly is citing a pretty uncontroversial statement. As well, the New York Post is used minimally and only for opinion, its presence doesn't harm the article much. No copyvio issues during the spot-check. A fair few quotes in the "Reception" section, but it doesn't come off as heavy-handed.
- Here's the Sun Sentinel review on Newspapers.com, the dead link can now be fixed!
Spot-check
[edit]- Torres, Richard (May 28, 2000). "Latin Sounds: Gloria Estefan the Baladeer". Newsday. p. D25. Archived from the original on January 8, 2024. Retrieved May 7, 2023.
- I've removed one citation: the "radio-friendly" bit almost subtly implies the opposite. Looks good otherwise.
- Niurka, Norma (May 3, 2000). "Gloria caribeña". El Nuevo Herald (in Spanish). p. 101. Archived from the original on May 8, 2023. Retrieved May 8, 2023.
- Looks good when translated.
- Martinez, Gerald (June 1, 2000). "Caribbean Soul!". Sunday Mail. p. 12. ProQuest 326211996. Archived from the original on October 16, 2023. Retrieved May 8, 2023.
- Looks good with other ref.
- "Abre su 'alma caribena'". Palabra (in Spanish). March 28, 2000. p. 8. ProQuest 377137404. Archived from the original on October 16, 2023. Retrieved May 7, 2023.
- Looks good when translated.
- Marymont, Mark (May 28, 2000). "At 74, King's Blues Strong as Ever". Springfield News-Leader. p. 5G. Archived from the original on January 8, 2024. Retrieved May 8, 2023.
- Looks good.
- Spencer, Neil (May 14, 2000). "Arts: Music: Pop Releases Gloria Estefan Alma Caribena". The Observer. p. 10. ProQuest 250449959. Archived from the original on October 16, 2023. Retrieved May 7, 2023.
- Looks good.
Broad in its coverage
[edit]Preliminary checks on TWL, Google Books/News, ProQuest, Newspapers.com, as well as general searches, make me confident that the article is broad in coverage. At a glance, I was hoping for more about the instruments, mixing, genres, but some of these details are found in the "Reception" section. I think this structure works well!
Neutral
[edit]The consensus seems to be represented fairly, and all quotes or opinions are attributed.
Stable
[edit]No recent content disputes or edit wars.
Illustrated
[edit]Standard song cover, looks nice.
- Consider writing the "not replaceable" and "respect for commercial oppurtunities" rationales.
Summary
[edit]@Magiciandude: Great work here! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 03:44, 7 May 2024 (UTC)
- Sorry about the slight delay, I'm working on it now. Erick (talk) 16:15, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Averageuntitleduser Alright, I've addressed the issues brought up except for the non free rationale, which I replaced with the standard album/single template. Erick (talk) 16:39, 9 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: No worries, and the license works nicely. Alright, one final comment! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 04:11, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Averageuntitleduser I fixed the dead link as requested. Erick (talk) 15:49, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- Fabulous! Happy to promote. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 21:29, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Averageuntitleduser I fixed the dead link as requested. Erick (talk) 15:49, 13 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: No worries, and the license works nicely. Alright, one final comment! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 04:11, 10 May 2024 (UTC)
- @Averageuntitleduser Alright, I've addressed the issues brought up except for the non free rationale, which I replaced with the standard album/single template. Erick (talk) 16:39, 9 May 2024 (UTC)