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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:22, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Magiciandude: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:22, 9 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  1. "Cuban American" or "Cuban-American"? Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. "her husband Emilio Estefan and Roberto Blades" - who is the second person? Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  3. Ttile is "No Me Dejes de Querer" is capitalised for no reason. 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)

Promotion

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  1. I would move ""No Me Dejes de Querer" was released as the album's lead single on March 27, 2000, by Epic Records.[13] The accompanying music video was directed by Emilio, filmed at the Tropicana Club in Miami, Florida, recorded in 24 hours, and released on March 28, 2000.[14] In the video, Gloria is seen wearing a Dolce & Gabbana dress and dancing with other 200 extras who are dressed to the fashion of Cuba in the 1950s.[14]" to "Background and composition". In the next step I would move "At the inaugural Latin Grammy Awards in 2000, "No Me Dejes de Querer" won Best Short Form Music Video.[15] At the 2001 Billboard Music Video Awards, the visual was nominated "Best Clip of the Year" under the Latin field but ultimately lost to "She Bangs" by Ricky Martin." to new section "Commercial performance" and add "At the inaugural Latin Grammy Awards in 2000, "No Me Dejes de Querer" was nominated in the category of Best Tropical Song which was awarded to "El Niágara en Bicicleta" by Juan Luis Guerra.[31][32] It was recognized as an award-winning song at the 2001 BMI Latin Awards.[33] At the 8th Annual Billboard Latin Music Awards in the same year, it was nominated for Latin Dance Maxi-Single of the Year and Latin Dance Club Play Track of the Year but ultimately lost both awards to "Solo Me Importas Tú" by Enrique Iglesias.[34]" with "Commercially, it reached number one in Spain and topped the Billboard Hot Latin Songs, Latin Pop Airplay, and Tropical Airplay charts in the United States.[35][36][37] It became her Spanish-language song to rank on the Billboard Hot 100 where it peaked at number 77.[38] Furthermore, it reached 100 in the Netherlands, [39] 76 in Switzerland,[40] and numbers eight and 31 on the Billboard Dance Club Songs and Regional Mexican Airplay charts in the US, respectively.[41][42] Due to it ranking on the latter chart however, Epic Records was suspected of performing payola by the magazine.[43]". Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Background and composition

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  1. "In 1998, Gloria Estefan released Gloria!" - sounds like she released it in person. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. "happy record" - I don't think that just two words has to be in quotation marks if it's paraphrased. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception and accolades

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  1. "Cuban son" or "son cubano"? "son cubano" seem to be a common name. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. "Deborah Davis of El Norte highlighted the song along with "Tres Gotas de Agua Bendita"" - I would mention that is also her song. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  3. "AllMusic reviewer William Ruhlmann regarded the remix to be a "requisite dancefloor entry"." - which remix? Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  4. "Furthermore, it reached 100 in the Netherlands,[39] 76 in Switzerland," - shouldn't be "Furthermore, it reached number 100 in the Netherlands,[39] number 76 in Switzerland"? Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Formats and track listings

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  1. Is this CD single? Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Other

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  1. Add link to AllMusic to reference number 2 and next. Check also the other references. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Add table with awards like in Boten Anna#Awards. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  3. Error in reference 42 and 44. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  4. I did minor fixes. Eurohunter (talk) 13:37, 20 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There have been no responses here or significant edits to the article since the nomination was opened, so I have closed this nomination. Please feel free to renominate this article once the above issues have been looked over and the article otherwise meets the WP:GACR. Best, CMD (talk) 12:45, 25 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Nominator: Magiciandude (talk · contribs) 18:17, 8 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Averageuntitleduser (talk · contribs) 23:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I'll be giving this a go! And ugh, those salsa vibes and horns are doing it for me. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 23:54, 3 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Well-written

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Nothing that a fresh pair of eyes can't bring up to scratch. Feel free to revert my copyedits/tweaks. Of course, lovely work here!

  • At the New Year's Eve concert in the same year — which concert? Any specific title or location?
  • In a similar review of the album, — this sentence is a bit confusing. Is this quote: "how little consequence she is", positive or negative? The conjunction "where" makes an unclear connection; do they believe that Reguiera outperformed her on the remix?
  • It became her Spanish-language — "first", "second", or some other qualifier seems missing.

Verifiable with no original research

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A lot of prominent Mexican and American newspapers, looks good on a reliability front. Us Weekly is citing a pretty uncontroversial statement. As well, the New York Post is used minimally and only for opinion, its presence doesn't harm the article much. No copyvio issues during the spot-check. A fair few quotes in the "Reception" section, but it doesn't come off as heavy-handed.

  • Here's the Sun Sentinel review on Newspapers.com, the dead link can now be fixed!

Spot-check

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  • Torres, Richard (May 28, 2000). "Latin Sounds: Gloria Estefan the Baladeer". Newsday. p. D25. Archived from the original on January 8, 2024. Retrieved May 7, 2023.
    • I've removed one citation: the "radio-friendly" bit almost subtly implies the opposite. Looks good otherwise. Green tickY
  • Niurka, Norma (May 3, 2000). "Gloria caribeña". El Nuevo Herald (in Spanish). p. 101. Archived from the original on May 8, 2023. Retrieved May 8, 2023.
    • Looks good when translated. Green tickY
  • Martinez, Gerald (June 1, 2000). "Caribbean Soul!". Sunday Mail. p. 12. ProQuest 326211996. Archived from the original on October 16, 2023. Retrieved May 8, 2023.
    • Looks good with other ref. Green tickY
  • "Abre su 'alma caribena'". Palabra (in Spanish). March 28, 2000. p. 8. ProQuest 377137404. Archived from the original on October 16, 2023. Retrieved May 7, 2023.
    • Looks good when translated. Green tickY
  • Marymont, Mark (May 28, 2000). "At 74, King's Blues Strong as Ever". Springfield News-Leader. p. 5G. Archived from the original on January 8, 2024. Retrieved May 8, 2023.
    • Looks good. Green tickY
  • Spencer, Neil (May 14, 2000). "Arts: Music: Pop Releases Gloria Estefan Alma Caribena". The Observer. p. 10. ProQuest 250449959. Archived from the original on October 16, 2023. Retrieved May 7, 2023.
    • Looks good. Green tickY

Broad in its coverage

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Preliminary checks on TWL, Google Books/News, ProQuest, Newspapers.com, as well as general searches, make me confident that the article is broad in coverage. At a glance, I was hoping for more about the instruments, mixing, genres, but some of these details are found in the "Reception" section. I think this structure works well!

Neutral

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The consensus seems to be represented fairly, and all quotes or opinions are attributed.

Stable

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No recent content disputes or edit wars.

Illustrated

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Standard song cover, looks nice.

  • Consider writing the "not replaceable" and "respect for commercial oppurtunities" rationales.

Summary

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@Magiciandude: Great work here! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 03:44, 7 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry about the slight delay, I'm working on it now. Erick (talk) 16:15, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Averageuntitleduser Alright, I've addressed the issues brought up except for the non free rationale, which I replaced with the standard album/single template. Erick (talk) 16:39, 9 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Magiciandude: No worries, and the license works nicely. Alright, one final comment! Averageuntitleduser (talk) 04:11, 10 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Averageuntitleduser I fixed the dead link as requested. Erick (talk) 15:49, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Fabulous! Happy to promote. Averageuntitleduser (talk) 21:29, 13 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.