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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:30, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Reviewing one of your articles for the first time in a while, this should be good! --K. Peake 16:30, 16 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Wikilink Emily Warren in the infobox
  • "featuring English singer" → "that features English singer"
  • "the former's first extended play," → "the former's debut EP,"
  • "Pip Kembo, with production from the latter two." → "Pip Kembo. Production and co-production were handled by Sermstyle and Kembo, respectively."
  • "is also included on" → "was later included on"
  • "reggae, tropical pop track," → "reggae, and tropical pop track,"
  • "with lyrics about Paul expressing" → "with the lyrics seeing Paul express"
  • "the top 10 in 10 charts" → "the top 10 of the charts in 10 countries"
  • "including the UK Singles Chart where it became" → "including the UK Singles Chart, becoming"
  • "first UK Top 10 single." → "first top 10 single in the United Kingdom."
  • "It is currently certified gold" → "The song has since been certified gold"
  • "the United Kingdom, where is has a platinum certification." → "the UK, having received a platinum certification in the country."
  • "The song received a music video in 2017" → "An accompanying music video was released in January 2017"
  • "promoted the single with" → "promoted the song with"
  • "including ones at" → "including performing it at"
  • "and Delirous & Alex K have been" → "and Delirous & Alex K, respectively, have been"

 Done

Background and composition

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  • "that makes use of keyboards" → "track that makes use of a keyboard" on the audio sample text
  • "Emily Warren and its producer and co-producer, Sermstyle and Pip Kembo." → "Emily Warren, its producer Sermstyle, and co-producer Pip Kembo." with the wikilink
  • "in which he" → "after which he"
  • "wrote onto it," → "wrote onto the rhythm"
  • "he went searching" → "Paul went searching"
  • Target hook to Hook (music)
  • "her voice and went onto finish" → "Lipa's voice and went on to finish"
  • "The engineering was handled by" → "Engineering was handled by"
  • "took on mixing duties," → "was responsible for mixing,"
  • ""No Lie" is an" → "Musically, "No Lie" is an"
  • "for three minutes and 41 seconds," → "for 3:41,"
  • Target chords to Chord (music)
  • "It starts a bit moody," → "The song starts somewhat moody,"
  • "comments of the physique" → "comments on the physique"
  • "and about his attraction" → "and his attraction"
  • "expressing to her" → "expressing to the woman" to avoid too many uses of "her"
  • "The song's title comes from" → "The title "No Lie" comes from"

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Release and promotion

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  • "along with a 15-second preview" → "alongside sharing a 15-second preview"
  • "through Island Records on" → "through Island Records as a single on" with the target
  • "It was serviced" → ""No Lie" was serviced"
  • "formats in the United States" → "stations in the United States"
  • "by Universal Music" → "by Universal Music Group"
  • Why is Germany release after the radio ones in prose when it came before them?
  • "It is also included" → "It was later included"
  • Do you need to mention what label Lipa's album was released through because you didn't for Paul's album?
  • "on the Baywatch (2017) soundtrack," → "on the soundtrack to the film Baywatch (2017),"
  • "in their third studio, as well as their garden." → "in the third studio, as well as the garden."
  • "viewed it as" → "viewed the video as" to specify it is not his outfit they were writing about
  • "at Capital FM's Jingle Bell Ball." → "at the Jingle Bell Ball for Capital FM."
  • "On 27 May of that year, the two" → "On 27 May, the two"
  • "at BBC Radio 1's Big Weekend of that year," → "at BBC Radio 1 Big Weekend for 2017," with the wikilink and target
  • "with her song" → "with her track"
  • "for a final time together" → "for the final time together"
  • "Capital FM's Summertime Ball 2017," → "the Summertime Ball for Capital FM 2017,"
  • "and Lipa's setlist at" → "as well as Lipa's setlist at"
  • "The song was included" → "The song was also included"
  • Identify the tour as The Self-Titled Tour
  • "where she occasionally performed" → "for which she occasionally performed"

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Reception

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  • "named it a" → "named the song a"
  • Keep the HotNewHipHop review, though remove the "HOTTTTT" rating part because that is not a proper rating like stars and is clearly unencyclopedic
  • "the song a rating of 4.25, with many" → "the song a rating of 4.25/10, with many"
  • "ranked it as" → "ranked "No Lie" as"
  • "on the charted dated" → "on the UK Singles Chart dated" with the wikilink
  • "lasted a total of 30 weeks on the chart," → "lasted for 30 weeks on the chart,"
  • "first UK top ten single." → "first UK top 10 single."
  • "was awarded a platinum certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) for track-equivalent sales of 600,000 units." → "was certified platinum by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) for track-equivalent sales of 600,000 units in the UK."
  • "the top 10 of charts" → "the top 10 of the charts"
  • "It currently holds a platinum certification in" → "It was certified platinum in"
  • Add after the countries who certified it, like: "by the Syndicat National de l'Édition Phonographique (SNEP),..." continuing to mention the other certification organisations and add at the very end "respectively"
  • "reached number 11," → "reached number 11 on the FIMI Singles Chart," with the target
  • "reached number 45 in Colombia and 43 in Venezuela," → "reached number 43 and 45 in Venezuela and Columbia, respectively,"
  • "on the Hot Canadian Digital Songs," → "on the Hot Canadian Digital Songs chart,"

 Done

Track listing

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  • Retitle to Track listings

 Done

Credits and personnel

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Song credits

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  • Do you know the location of Alchemy Mastering, specifically?

 Done

Video credits

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  • Good

Charts

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Weekly charts

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  • Should the Czech Republic and Slovakia radio charts really be here?
  • Nothing is found for the Mexico chart by clicking on the URL
  • Why is the video chart included for Poland as well as the Airplay one?
  • The Romania peak is not displayed by the source

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Year-end charts

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  • Poland (ZPAV) → Poland (Polish Airplay Top 100)
  • UK Singles (Official Charts Company) → UK Singles (OCC)
  • The 2019 year-end chart position should have a separate table from the table for two years prior

 Done

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Format → Format(s)

 Done

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks nice at 5.7%!
  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
  • Add language parameter for refs 18 and 33
  • Various releases for the "No Lie" remixes: → Citations regarding the digital release of the "No Lie" remixes: on ref 19
  • Cite Media Forest as publisher instead for ref 48 with the wikilink, plus cite an archive or change the URL
  • RadioAirplay → Radio Airplay Italia on ref 50
  • WP:OVERLINK of National-Report on ref 57
  • Either change ref 59 URL or cite an archive
  • Various releases for "No Lie": → Citations regarding the digital release of "No Lie": on ref 60
  • Cite SloTop50 as the publisher for ref 75 with the wikilink and remove it from the title
  • GfK Entertainment → Gfk Entertainment charts on ref 79, citing as the sole publisher instead
  • Target Mahasz to Association of Hungarian Record Companies on ref 80
  • WP:OVERLINK of Mahasz on refs 81 and 82
  • mediaforest.bizz → Media Forest on ref 83 and add language parameter
  • Target FIMI to Federazione Industria Musicale Italiana on ref 84
  • Remove hitparade.ch from the title of ref 87

 Done

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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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