Talk:No Lie (Sean Paul song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:30, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Reviewing one of your articles for the first time in a while, this should be good! --K. Peake 16:30, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Wikilink Emily Warren in the infobox
• "featuring English singer" → "that features English singer"
• "the former's first extended play," → "the former's debut EP,"

• I'm going to put "first EP" because Sean Paul released 6 albums before this EP and "debut" usually means an artist's first music work or body of work. LOVI33 21:31, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• "Pip Kembo, with production from the latter two." → "Pip Kembo. Production and co-production were handled by Sermstyle and Kembo, respectively."
• "is also included on" → "was later included on"
• "reggae, tropical pop track," → "reggae, and tropical pop track,"
• "with lyrics about Paul expressing" → "with the lyrics seeing Paul express"
• "the top 10 in 10 charts" → "the top 10 of the charts in 10 countries"
• "including the UK Singles Chart where it became" → "including the UK Singles Chart, becoming"
• "first UK Top 10 single." → "first top 10 single in the United Kingdom."
• "It is currently certified gold" → "The song has since been certified gold"
• "the United Kingdom, where is has a platinum certification." → "the UK, having received a platinum certification in the country."
• "The song received a music video in 2017" → "An accompanying music video was released in January 2017"
• "promoted the single with" → "promoted the song with"
• "including ones at" → "including performing it at"
• "and Delirous & Alex K have been" → "and Delirous & Alex K, respectively, have been"

 Done

Background and composition

• "that makes use of keyboards" → "track that makes use of a keyboard" on the audio sample text
• "Emily Warren and its producer and co-producer, Sermstyle and Pip Kembo." → "Emily Warren, its producer Sermstyle, and co-producer Pip Kembo." with the wikilink
• "in which he" → "after which he"
• "wrote onto it," → "wrote onto the rhythm"
• "he went searching" → "Paul went searching"
• Target hook to Hook (music)
• "her voice and went onto finish" → "Lipa's voice and went on to finish"
• "The engineering was handled by" → "Engineering was handled by"
• "took on mixing duties," → "was responsible for mixing,"
• ""No Lie" is an" → "Musically, "No Lie" is an"
• "for three minutes and 41 seconds," → "for 3:41,"
• Target chords to Chord (music)
• "It starts a bit moody," → "The song starts somewhat moody,"
• "comments of the physique" → "comments on the physique"
• "and about his attraction" → "and his attraction"
• "expressing to her" → "expressing to the woman" to avoid too many uses of "her"
• "The song's title comes from" → "The title "No Lie" comes from"

 Done

Release and promotion

• "along with a 15-second preview" → "alongside sharing a 15-second preview"
• "through Island Records on" → "through Island Records as a single on" with the target
• "It was serviced" → ""No Lie" was serviced"
• "formats in the United States" → "stations in the United States"
• "by Universal Music" → "by Universal Music Group"
• Why is Germany release after the radio ones in prose when it came before them?

• Placed before. LOVI33 22:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• "featuring Tory Lanez as its B-side." → "that features Tory Lanez as the B-side." with the target
• "Paul's first extended play Mad Love the Prequel," → "Paul's debut EP Mad Love the Prequel,"

• Again, I'm going to put "first EP" per above. LOVI33 22:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• "It is also included" → "It was later included"
• Do you need to mention what label Lipa's album was released through because you didn't for Paul's album?

• I thought that since the single was released through Island records that it kind of implied that so was the EP, but I'll remove it. LOVI33 22:17, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• "on the Baywatch (2017) soundtrack," → "on the soundtrack to the film Baywatch (2017),"
• "in their third studio, as well as their garden." → "in the third studio, as well as the garden."
• "viewed it as" → "viewed the video as" to specify it is not his outfit they were writing about
• "at Capital FM's Jingle Bell Ball." → "at the Jingle Bell Ball for Capital FM."
• "On 27 May of that year, the two" → "On 27 May, the two"
• "at BBC Radio 1's Big Weekend of that year," → "at BBC Radio 1 Big Weekend for 2017," with the wikilink and target
• "with her song" → "with her track"
• "for a final time together" → "for the final time together"
• "Capital FM's Summertime Ball 2017," → "the Summertime Ball for Capital FM 2017,"
• "and Lipa's setlist at" → "as well as Lipa's setlist at"
• "The song was included" → "The song was also included"
• Identify the tour as The Self-Titled Tour
• "where she occasionally performed" → "for which she occasionally performed"

 Done

Reception

• "named it a" → "named the song a"
• Keep the HotNewHipHop review, though remove the "HOTTTTT" rating part because that is not a proper rating like stars and is clearly unencyclopedic
• "the song a rating of 4.25, with many" → "the song a rating of 4.25/10, with many"
• "ranked it as" → "ranked "No Lie" as"
• "on the charted dated" → "on the UK Singles Chart dated" with the wikilink
• "lasted a total of 30 weeks on the chart," → "lasted for 30 weeks on the chart,"
• "first UK top ten single." → "first UK top 10 single."
• "was awarded a platinum certification from the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) for track-equivalent sales of 600,000 units." → "was certified platinum by the British Phonographic Industry (BPI) for track-equivalent sales of 600,000 units in the UK."
• "the top 10 of charts" → "the top 10 of the charts"
• "It currently holds a platinum certification in" → "It was certified platinum in"
• Add after the countries who certified it, like: "by the Syndicat National de l'Édition Phonographique (SNEP),..." continuing to mention the other certification organisations and add at the very end "respectively"
• "reached number 11," → "reached number 11 on the FIMI Singles Chart," with the target
• "reached number 45 in Colombia and 43 in Venezuela," → "reached number 43 and 45 in Venezuela and Columbia, respectively,"
• "on the Hot Canadian Digital Songs," → "on the Hot Canadian Digital Songs chart,"

 Done

Track listing

• Retitle to Track listings

 Done

Credits and personnel

Song credits

• Do you know the location of Alchemy Mastering, specifically?

• It doesn't say in the liner notes, but according to its website, it is in London. Should I add that? LOVI33 22:45, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• No, it is fine to not mention the location if the liner notes don't --K. Peake 08:02, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

• Target EMI April Music Inc. to EMI Records
• Wikilink Sean Paul
• Wikilink Dua Lipa
• Wikilink Sermstyle
• Wikilink Barry Grint

 Done

Video credits

• Good

Charts

Weekly charts

• Should the Czech Republic and Slovakia radio charts really be here?

• Removed. LOVI33 22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• Nothing is found for the Mexico chart by clicking on the URL

• Fixed. LOVI33 22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• Why is the video chart included for Poland as well as the Airplay one?

• Removed. LOVI33 22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• The Romania peak is not displayed by the source

• Added note on how to access the correct chart. LOVI33 22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

 Done

Year-end charts

• Poland (ZPAV) → Poland (Polish Airplay Top 100)
• UK Singles (Official Charts Company) → UK Singles (OCC)
• The 2019 year-end chart position should have a separate table from the table for two years prior

• Changed. LOVI33 22:57, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

 Done

Certifications

• Good

Release history

• Format → Format(s)

 Done

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks nice at 5.7%!
• Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
• Add language parameter for refs 18 and 33
• Various releases for the "No Lie" remixes: → Citations regarding the digital release of the "No Lie" remixes: on ref 19
• Cite Media Forest as publisher instead for ref 48 with the wikilink, plus cite an archive or change the URL

• Added note on how to access the correct chart. LOVI33 23:10, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• RadioAirplay → Radio Airplay Italia on ref 50
• WP:OVERLINK of National-Report on ref 57
• Either change ref 59 URL or cite an archive

• Fixed. LOVI33 23:10, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• Various releases for "No Lie": → Citations regarding the digital release of "No Lie": on ref 60
• Cite SloTop50 as the publisher for ref 75 with the wikilink and remove it from the title
• GfK Entertainment → Gfk Entertainment charts on ref 79, citing as the sole publisher instead
• Target Mahasz to Association of Hungarian Record Companies on ref 80
• WP:OVERLINK of Mahasz on refs 81 and 82
• mediaforest.bizz → Media Forest on ref 83 and add language parameter
• Target FIMI to Federazione Industria Musicale Italiana on ref 84
• Remove hitparade.ch from the title of ref 87

 Done

External links

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, though hopefully this review will continue your consistent response rate! --K. Peake 09:30, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• Hey Kyle Peake, thanks for another amazing review. I have done all your suggestions, let me know if you need me to do anything else. LOVI33 23:10, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

• LOVI33 ✓ Pass after you followed through amazingly! --K. Peake 08:02, 18 November 2020 (UTC)

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