Talk:No Church in the Wild/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 02:06, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

1 access issue, 2 uncategorized redirects

Done.

Lead

I fixed up some issues here myself.

Thank you!

Background

Jay-Z and Kanye West are both American rappers who have collaborated on several tracks together. --> No need to use the word "both" and how about mentioning a few of the songs they did together previously?

Done

Composition

Where is the source for the "hip hop" genre?
About Ocean's chorus --> On Ocean's chorus

Both done.

Reception

If a title within quotes is present, you use this --> ' <-- (for the life of me, I cannot think of its name) for the title.

Done?

Promotion

Link to Watch the Throne Tour
on locations in the Czech Republic --> in the Czech Republic
29th of May --> May 29, 2012

Done.

Charts

No sources?

Over-sight, has been done.

References

A few publishers are missing. Such as Pitchfork Media and Now.
Ref 30 - Rollingstone.com --> Rolling Stone. Wenner Media
The correct publisher for Billboard is Prometheus Global Media
Idolator (website) --> Idolator
MTV. Viacom --> MTV News. MTV Networks
Just a few examples of the issues with the refs. There are more. Check to make sure they are all correct.

Have been corrected. Though Pitchfork has no publisher as far as I'm aware.

All issues have been addressed. Passing the article! Statυs (talk) 18:36, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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