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February 9, 2020Good article nomineeListed
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The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Nino Tkeshelashvili and other early Georgian feminists campaigned to uphold women's "moral standards", labeling prostitution a "social evil"?

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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 22:30, 2 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Give me a few days on this, cheers.♦ Dr. Blofeld

Intro


  • Rep of "time" = she completed the schooling available to her at the time in Tiflis and then worked for a time in Didi Jikhaishi as a Russian language teacher. Why not just "was partly educated in Tiflis" or something?
 Done SusunW (talk) 06:04, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • " and co-founded the Caucasian Women's Society. " - when and with whom?
 Done SusunW (talk) 06:04, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Together with other feminists, she turned to writing, becoming above all a children's writer in the Soviet era." - "together with other feminists" is repeated. I would just say something like "she became a writer, particularly for children". or something similar, something to simplify it.
 Done SusunW (talk) 06:04, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Career
  • "She lived in a boarding house belonging to Ivane Machabeli. One of the other tenants, Mariam Demuria [ka], was closely involved in public works projects. She worked as a journalist and regularly gave lectures to the general public. She also ran a Sunday school to offer education to workers and hired Tkeshelashvili to teach Russian language courses. " -problematic as you refer to two different people as "she"
Machabeli is a man, so I didn't think it was confusing, but I have clarified changing "She worked as a journalist" to "Demuria worked as a journalist". I did not change the next sentence, as Tkeshelashvili couldn't have hired herself. Hope it is clearer. If not, let me know. SusunW (talk) 06:15, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Around 1912, Tkeshelashvili began publishing translations and original works in კვალი (Trace) and the children's magazine ჯეჯილი (Jejili, meaning "wheat shoots"), founded by Anastasia Tumanishvili-Tsereteli. That year, she also joined the editorial staff of ნაკადულის (The Stream), where she met writers Nino Nakashidze and Akaki Tsereteli. Writing under the pseudonym სუფრაჟისტკას (Suffragist" -shouldn't the titles be italicized? Check entire section and italicize the names in brackets
I think I got all of these.  Done SusunW (talk) 06:15, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In 1914, during World War I, the Caucasian Women's Society began operating free canteens and sewing clothes for soldiers. She also " - surname needed instead of "she" as you were discussing the society
 Done SusunW (talk) 06:15, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@SusunW: Thanks for your patience on this.♦ Dr. Blofeld 21:59, 8 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review Dr. Blofeld, I really appreciate it. Let me know if you need me to work on anything else. SusunW (talk) 06:17, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Good job SusunW!♦ Dr. Blofeld 14:33, 9 February 2020 (UTC)[reply]