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Nominator: Gerda Arendt (talk · contribs) 11:13, 4 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 07:57, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Starting review. 750h+ 07:57, 12 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

prose

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lead

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  • The cantata belongs to Bach's chorale cantata cycle, the second cantata cycle during his tenure i'd remove the second "cantana

history and words

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  •  in the first performance of the cantata on 13 ==> "in the first cantata performance on 13"
    I tried "the cantata's first performance". --GA
    I remember that in the FAC of BWV 1, the repetition of "cantata" was criticized ;) - I tried by using the title once (but it is too long to do that often, and removed the one you pointed out, although I am not quite convinced that someone who never heard of Bach's cycles would immediately recognize what is meant. --GA

music

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  • The orchestra, oboes and strings, plays in this cantata "plays" should be "play"
    The orchestra plays, but I dropped "orchestra", and tried to say what's unusual about that, please check. --GA
  • expanding each single line several new lines add a "to" before several
    I used "by", - please check ref Dellal, where the chorale lines are bold and the others not, to see if it could be explained better. I was quite surprised that the librettist sometimes added in the middle of a sentence. --GA

source and image review

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verdict

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