Talk:NAD 3020/GA1

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Reviewer: B137 (talk · contribs) 19:00, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

References: The article relies heavily upon a few sources. Several of these sources are of questionable reliability, and at least one is published by NAD themselves, which generally should appear as an external link if at all. Sources that were originally or primarily print should be added in a proper "Further reading" section. A better reference should be added for the most popular statistic. Also a date for that should be given (as of). I believe the current source was published in 1998.
- It was undoubtedly and universally hailed by the press during its lifetime, which explained why it sold as well as it did. Unfortunately, please bear in mind that the press at the time was wholly in printed magazines, and few of the reviews ever survived the internet era, and I do not have access to those magazines to cite them. The NAD website was used sparingly, and is used to cite manufacturer's claims. -- Ohc ^¡digame! 01:11, 3 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Prose: The article read a bit rough so I did some of my own copyediting; however, it should still be improved.

COI: I edited this article before rather than after starting the review, which may disqualify my reviewer credibility. Whatever.

Breadth: The article is broad enough in coverage given the subject matter; however, concerning

Neutrality: Other than the brief line criticizing the external appearance, the article is almost a puff piece.

Notability: More should be added about how this unit was a standard issue for certain educational institutions. It would be a breath of fresh air from the rote statistics.

Conclusion: I would like to pass it, regardless of it being written somewhat like an advertisement, as much of it is referenced (albeit by dubious sources). Mostly just waiting to see if my own contributions disqualify me and give it an automatic failure.

Status: On-hold, possibly for improvements, as well as input regarding the uncertainty of my pertinent authority.

B137 (talk) 19:00, 2 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Just thought I'd drop by with some sources! Highbeam had next to nothing on reviews, though.

"ONE of the first true hi-fi amplifiers I ever bought was a NAD 3020, a best-buy budget component that is still going strong despite being subjected to much battery and abuse for over 18 years.That should tell you something about the durability and reliability of the products manufactured by NAD, a 25-year-old company which is now Canadian-owned. Not only that, NAD was also one of the first audio companies to offer products that combined such qualities as performance, value and simplicity at prices that most people could afford."[1]
"Of course NAD is venerated for the Model 3020 integrated amplifier..."[2]
One last comment, but you should be able to read the relevant part without a login.[3]
Google books snippet has a bit that is readable on its marketing.[4]

Stereo Review had an article on it in July 1979 if anyone can get their hands on it. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 13:03, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for the additional source.

Update: The fact that I edited the article I don't really think matters, what would be a turnkey addition is a reliable source for it's use in schools, as I stated before. Walmart sells one million of a lot of things, but that doesn't make them noteworthy. For example, GV toilet paper. GV toilet paper you could say probably does get used a lot commercially such as in schools, but they are not schools of toilet paper. However, this amplifier being used as a standard issue in institutions of electrical engineering or even more specifically "hi-fi audio" would, however, further substantiate it's notability. A good solid source for this and I would pass it certainly.

Some small tweaks to the article may be appropriate; for example, the section header "Philosophy" may be inappropriate, where philosophy is an extension of math and science when math and science alone do not suffice, and while this unit was heralded I don't believe anyone suggested that it worked any miracles. B137 (talk) 18:30, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I've copyedit the article some more and I've added some sources, including the above. However, I'm a bit at a loss about the "standard issue for certain educational institutions". There is nothing in the article about it, nor is that fact mentioned in any of the sources or magazines I have read about same anywhere. Perhaps you could enlighten me? -- Ohc ^¡digame! 04:30, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'm referring to Talk:NAD 3020#Standard issue to students; although maybe this purportion is being taken a little too far, consult the user to inquire as to perhaps the names of said institutions. B137 (talk) 04:44, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Notability is not part of the GA criteria for obvious reasons, but N and GNG basically boil down to "Can we write an article without original research that can be backed up and verified by credible sources?" Many things are notable, and exist in everyday life, but being able to write an article about and on them that is informative is quite different. My Chester Rock Light article contains basically all that was ever known and found in all my sources (and I dug up all that I can) yet it made less of an impact than the original NAD 3020. For my article, Wikipedia is the BEST in terms of coverage that exists - it compiles everything ever known and makes it accessible and its entirely verifiable. Ohconfucious has done the same with the NAD3020 - while he is missing some of the period reviews it simply does not matter in the grand scheme of things. Why? Because he has already shown that people care, its legacy is still known decades later and is the subject of comparison and new models. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 04:59, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

OIC. I don't believe any educational institutions actually supplied these to students in any shape or form. I don't think it would make any financial sense for them to do so. My understanding – and I was around at the time – is that it was "standard issue" in the sense that some retailers (including Billy Vee in South London), targeting the university student market, would advertise packages that included the Dual, NAD and a pair of Missions, and would perhaps throw in a pair of good quality speaker cables or other accessories for free. Many freshmen would turn up in their digs with these items, thus "standard". -- Ohc ^¡digame! 08:01, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Here's a clipped ad: [5] - Note this is Indiana Gazette (Indiana, Pennsylvania) from December 29, 1979 - For some reason Newspapers.com has this paper tagged incorrectly. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:13, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Did some digging with different parameters.

1987 newspaper claiming the 3020 is "legendary" and about 8 years old (as in article)[6]
1989 Calling it the largest selling (highest number sold) and a good market buy a decade after its debut and noted it was "much copied".[7]
The Milwaukee Sentinel - Aug 20, 1981 using BOTH magazine and actually quoting from the text to back it up. I am certain that the quotes are genuine and help that "Notability" matter.[8]
Amp of the year[9] if you ignore the ad and of course -

Found a small trove.[10][11] From this website.[12] ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:45, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

- Ebay to the rescue.[13] There is your review. Here another document. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 05:46, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Conflicting data: Just a couple more tweaks, as I stated before the source that calls it "best selling" is from 1998, so perhaps it should say as of 1998. Also, the source itself states best selling hi-fi [high-end] audio amplifier. I don't have sales data in front of me but I'd be willing to bet many low end audio devices have sold over one million units as well. Furthermore, the article goes on to state (NAD_3020#Spin-offs_and_legacy) that the NAD 3020A was "even more popular" than [the 3020], and that one of the two, it's ambiguous, sold over half a million units in it's first three years. Clean this up and I think we'll call it a pass; however, it would be so nice if it could say, when referring to it's popularity, "including it's use as standard issue reference audio equipment in educational institutions such as..." B137 (talk) 18:05, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I have amended the article to address the points raised. As there does not seem to be any sources re education (see my comment on this above), I'm obliged to omit such mention. Regards, -- Ohc ^¡digame! 02:33, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Little note, "more popular" does not translate into "more sales" - it just defines the interest in the product and/or its reception. Though I do agree that this article certainly meets the Good Article criteria. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 04:28, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]