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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:40, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:40, 29 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox, Lead

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  • Infobox looks good.
  • Remove the comma after "June 1995".
 Done Kailash29792 (talk) 12:22, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot, Cast

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  • The plot section passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • Remove the comma after "company".
  • "passerbys" → "passerby"
  • Remove the comma after "agreed".
  • Remove the comma after "chase Ambalathar".
  • Remove the comma after "new zamindar".
  • The cast section looks good.
Solved all. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:22, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production

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  • The first sentence feels short (try merging it with the next).
See how it is now. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:08, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "editing handled" → "editing was handled"
 Done. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:08, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "Raja Malayasimman".
 Done. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:08, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "approached for the role".
 Done. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:08, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "reluctance".
 Done. Kailash29792 (talk) 12:08, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Themes

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  • No issues here.

Music

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  • Convert this into a subsection in #Production per WP:FILMMUSIC.
 Done Kailash29792 (talk) 12:15, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

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  • This section looks good.

Reception, Awards

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  • Since these two sections are short, merge them together as two subsections under #Reception, preferably titled "Critical response" and "Accolades".
  • "simple hearted" → "simple-hearted"
  • "consisent" → "consistent"
  • The first section also appears to end abruptly so try fixing that.
  • Also remove the <br /> in the table (unnecessary).

Japanese version (Muthu Odoru Maharaja)

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  • Current header feels kinda long. Maybe just "Japanese version"?
  • The last sentence in the second paragraph is unsourced.
Resolved both. Kailash29792 (talk) 04:06, 4 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Legacy

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  • No issues here.

References

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  • Archive sources.
Archived everything possible. --Kailash29792 (talk) 11:47, 9 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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