Talk:Momentos Intimos/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 13:11, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt
• Release date → not sourced or in the body of the article
• Location of the studios, also not in the body of the article

• I have removed them. – jona ✉ 20:23, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• AMEN Studios → AMEN

• I have removed it. – jona ✉ 20:23, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• Genre not sourced
• Use bullet points, not flatlist for studio, producer
• Remove (producer)

 Done

Lead

• certified Gold (Latin) → remove wikilink

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:19, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Background

• A.B. Quintanilla; himself, Suzette Quintanilla → A.B. Quintanilla, Suzette Quintanilla

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:19, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Music

• Music → Composition
• of which the last eight are spoken liner notes provided by Selena's family, friends, and her Los Dinos band members. → needs source
• was shot and killed. → died (this was already mentioned above, keep it simple)
• , it ended 1994 as the most successful US Latin single on Billboard magazine → too much detail for a compilation album
• the track posthumously ranked on Billboard peaking at number 22 on the US Rhythmic Top 40 chart. → same as previous
• "This is followed by "Dreaming of You", which was originally intended for the R&B group The Jets in 1989, though was turned down. Written by Tom Snow and Franne Golde, Snow recalled how Golde never gave up on the song and provided it to Capitol Records during a selection screening.[18] "Dreaming of You" was among a selection of songs Selena was provided with from Capitol Records to choose from, the label vehemently controlled the entire crossover project and only allowed Selena to choose one song of her choice from this selection. Selena chose "Dreaming of You" for its lyrical content and message, while A. B. initially disliked the song based on the demo provided by the label." → too much background, needs to be trimed
• Posthumously released, the song peaked at number 22 on the Billboard Hot 100. → same as previous
• It peaked at number one on the Hot Latin Songs chart, giving Selena the first number-one single of her career. → same as previous
• it peaked at number one on the Hot Latin Songs chart in December 1993 → same as previous
• Following the impact of Selena's death, Christopher John Farley of Time magazine, wrote how the producers were most likely regretting their decision → same as previous
• "I Could Fall in Love" peaked at number one on Canada's RPM Adult Contemporary chart and at number eight on the US Hot 100 Airplay. → same as previous
• "No Me Queda Más" ended 1995 as the most successful US Latin single on Billboard magazine. → same as previous
• "In mid-March 1995, Selena's husband and guitarist of the group, Chris Pérez, was in his and Selena's in-house studio and recording demos for a Corpus Christi, Texas musician that Abraham was interested in promoting on his Q-Productions label. Pérez recalled in the liner notes, that the recording session with Dominguez was supposed to be an hour but took all day. Pérez wrote how he did not know Selena was eavesdropping and told him how he should have allowed Dominguez to record the song differently, once Dominguez had left their house. She continued, and insisted that Pérez should have instructed Dominguez to record the song "with more soul". Pérez responded that the singing was fruitless and was exhausted from the prolonged session. Selena requested to sing the song, to which Pérez thought she was joking. Pérez replayed the song after Selena expressed interest in doing so and began recording it, all the while Pérez began to notice that Selena had listened to the entire session as she began singing the lyrics. He found the finished product remarkable, finding that Selena recorded the song unrehearsed, and recorded the song spontaneously." → In mid-March 1995, Selena's husband and guitarist of the group, Chris Pérez, was in his and Selena's in-house studio and recording demos for a Corpus Christi, Texas musician that Abraham was interested in promoting on his Q-Productions label. After Dominguez left the house, Selena, who was eavesdropping, told Pérez that he should have instructed Dominguez to record the song "with more soul". Selena requested to sing the song and Pérez replayed and began recording it. At this point, Pérez noticed that Selena had listened to the entire session as she began singing the lyrics. Selena recorded the song unrehearsed and spontaneously. (something in this vein)

 Done

Critical reception and commercial performance

• Retitle to Reception
• Momentos Intimos proceeds majority Spanish-language Ones (2002) and Greatest Hits (2003), a collection of English-language songs. → Momentos Intimos not only proceeds the Spanish-language album, Ones (2002), but also Greatest Hits (2003), a collection of English-language songs.
• Add the release dates of the singles, with source

• The release date for "Puede Ser" is unknown.

• You have it as 2004 in the infobox? In the lead "Puede Ser" in April 2004"? If the date is unknown how do you know it is a single?

• I have removed it. – jona ✉ 20:23, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• In its third week of availability, Momentos Intimos fell to number 23 on the Top Latin Albums chart, a position lower than the debut of A. B.'s group Kumbia Kings's album Los Remixes Vol. 2. The album also dropped on the Regional Mexican Albums chart, falling to number 14. → too much detail
• The album continued to drop on the charts, falling to number 27 on the Top Latin Albums and number 15 on the Regional Mexican Albums chart in its fourth week.[42] In its fifth week, the album dropped to number 31 on the Top Latin Albums chart and number 19 on the Regional Mexican Albums chart → same as previous
• This continued for the album's sixth week, dropping to the last position of the Regional Mexican Albums and number 32 on the Top Latin Albums chart.[44] Momentos Intimos fell off the Regional Mexican Albums chart in its seventh week, while it dropped to number 43 on the Top Latin Albums chart → same as previous
• In its eighth week, the album fell to number 64, two positions higher than her Ones album that week.[46] Momentos Intimos rose two positions higher in the following week.[47] After a rise in sales in its 11th week, Momentos Intimos fell off the Top Latin Albums chart.[48] Momentos Intimos re-entered the Top Latin Albums chart on at number 65.[49] Momentos Intimos continued a rise in sales and rose to number 54 the following week.[50] After two weeks of declining sales, the album fell off the chart → same as previous
• Gold (Latin) → remove wikilink

 Done

Track listing

• Credits adapted from the liner notes of Momentos Intimos by EMI Latin. + source

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:18, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Personnel

• Two collums

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:14, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Charts

• Fine

Certification

• Not on given source

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:14, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

See also

• This is irrelevant → remove

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:14, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Notes

• This should be below the tracklist and needs a source as well

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:19, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

References

• Rename section to Citations, it will become a subsection of References
• Source check: 1, 10-12, 15, 19, 20, 22, 26, 31, 33, 34, 36-38, 40,and Billboard. Vol. 116, no. 16.

 Done MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:48, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Works cited

• Retitle to Websites
• RIAA.com. → fix
• Wikilink El Norte, San Antonio Express-News, Billboard, Newsweek, Houston Chronicle and The Washington Post
• Fix Kxan.com
• YouTube → publisher + wikilink

 Done

External links

• Fine

Overall

• Don't address any issues until the article is on hold. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:32, 29 June 2022 (UTC)

• I have fixed the issues you brought up. Best – jona ✉ 12:27, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

  You can cite the studios, but add them to the body of the article, with a reliable source, ofc. AllMusic tab can't be used to cite genres. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:13, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• I don't have the physical CD with me to verify the studio. I am most likely sure it is Q-Productions, but I can always update that information once I retrive the CD from storage. I have removed the genre from the infobox. Best – jona ✉ 20:23, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

  Of course, GA articles can and should always be improved. She recorded most of her songs in that studio, however don't forget to provide a source for it. You missed something. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:07, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• I have fixed it. Thanks – jona ✉ 13:30, 3 July 2022 (UTC)