Talk:Milutin Bojić/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:52, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Happy to review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:52, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Fairly well-written. Just a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 17:00, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

• In "Last years and death", he received a months' leave Should it be "month's"?

Fixed.

• In the same section, One evening in September 1917...he developed a heavy cough This part could be briefer.

Can you be more specific please? Which sentences exactly?

I mean the part in whole. I think it could be shortened to a line.

Now?

Better. Perhaps I felt we were going into some unnecessary detail. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

• In "Influences and themes", can we add "Irish writer" before "Oscar Wilde"?

Don't see why not.

That should be it. No copyvio detected, no dablinks, images are properly licensed.

Thanks for grabbing the nomination. It had been up for months with no takers. Best, 23 editor (talk) 23:33, 18 May 2016 (UTC)

Sorry it had to wait so long. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 00:26, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Alright, now ready for promotion. Cheers! Sainsf (talk · contribs) 02:00, 19 May 2016 (UTC)