Talk:Mickey Rocco/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
Going to review this. MWright96 (talk) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early life and career
[edit]- Who is Helen Harwell?
Major league career
[edit]- "On September 9, 1945 Rocco" - missing a comma here
- "After the season the Boston Red Sox" - ditto
- The Yankee Stadium wikilink should be to Yankee Stadium (1923)
- "In a team-leading 143 games, he had a .264 batting average, 10 home runs, and 56 RBIs." - This needs to be referenced
Later life
[edit]- "He died in his hometown of St. Paul, Minnesota on June 1, 1997 at the age of 81." - This statement doesn't have a reference.
References
[edit]Good work so far. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 19:36, 17 August 2016 (UTC)
- Issues mostly fixed. Harwell was his wife, didn't really find any other information on her other than the name; not sure what else I could add to that sentence. Wizardman 12:59, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for clearing up the point on his wife. Happy to promote this to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 13:34, 20 August 2016 (UTC)
- Great, thanks for the review! Looks like I'll have to start writing articles again, all got reviewed now :) Wizardman 13:40, 20 August 2016 (UTC)