Talk:Mickey Rocco

Mickey Rocco has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: August 20, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this. MWright96 (talk) 18:09, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

no dab links

Early life and career

Who is Helen Harwell?

Major league career

"On September 9, 1945 Rocco" - missing a comma here
"After the season the Boston Red Sox" - ditto
The Yankee Stadium wikilink should be to Yankee Stadium (1923)
"In a team-leading 143 games, he had a .264 batting average, 10 home runs, and 56 RBIs." - This needs to be referenced

Later life

"He died in his hometown of St. Paul, Minnesota on June 1, 1997 at the age of 81." - This statement doesn't have a reference.

References

no dead links

Good work so far. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 19:36, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Issues mostly fixed. Harwell was his wife, didn't really find any other information on her other than the name; not sure what else I could add to that sentence. Wizardman 12:59, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

- Thank you for clearing up the point on his wife. Happy to promote this to GA status. MWright96 (talk) 13:34, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Great, thanks for the review! Looks like I'll have to start writing articles again, all got reviewed now :) Wizardman 13:40, 20 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]