Talk:Micah Joseph Lebensohn/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Nominator: Ploni (talk · contribs) at 13:51, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I'll attempt to review this. Comments soon. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:11, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA criteria

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

Mention in the prose the date of his birth and death.
In the biography section, we start by writing about his teenage: As a teenager, Lebensohn, ..., then we move back to age 12,and began to translate poetry into Hebrew at the age of twelve ..., then back to teenage: At the age of sixteen he.... Make it chronological.
By the late 1840s, Lebensohn discovered the first symptoms of tuberculosis. – Not sure what "first symptom" is. Better to write it as "early symptoms of tuberculosis"
he attended the philosphy lectures of Schelling at the university – Is it a typo, or you intended to write is as "philosphy", not "philosophy". Also, suggesting to rephrase as "he attended the philosphy/philosophy lectures of Schelling at the Humboldt University of Berlin"
'Prayer, Daughter of Hearts.' – full stop outside the single quotation (MOS:QUOTEMARKS) Please correct me if I am wrong
among other works.^[11]^[5] – Ref 5 should be before 11.
on the death of M. A. Günzburg.^[11]^[7] – Same as above. 7 should be before 11.
In the Jewish Encyclopedia (1904), Herman Rosenthal and Peter Wiernik [Wikidata] write that – "[...] wrote that"
File:Micha Josef Lebensohn.jpg – How can we claim that the author died 70 years ago, when we don't know who the author is? When was it first published.
Rest seems fine. Nice work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:50, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the feedback! I've made the suggested improvements. –Ploni (talk) 15:58, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Happy to pass then. Good work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:08, 26 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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