Talk:Mi Mayor Venganza/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start this today! --K. Peake 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• Add a comma after fifth studio album
• "by Isidro Infante and released as" → "by Isidro Infante, and released as"
• You need to add the genre in comp as salsa with a source, rather than merely having a mention of it in reception
• "song in which La India tells the woman" → "song, in which La India tells the woman"
• The lead is out of order after the above sentence; critical reception should come first, then the accolade followed by commercial performance and finally the music video
• "for the track features" → "for the song features"
• "was praised by two music critics while" → "were praised by two music critics, while"
• "peaked at number four and one" → "peaked at numbers four and one"
• "It was a recipient of" → "The song was a recipient of"

Background and composition

• A colon is not needed after five singles
• Remove comma before Jazzin'
• "and arranger, Isidro Infante, signed on to" → "and arranger Isidro Infante signed with"
• "produced by Infante whom" → "produced by Infante, whom"
• "and is her" → "and is La India's"
• Remove comma after "Mi Mayor Venganza"
• Add a sentence with a source clarifying the song itself is salsa, also add more comp info if you can
• "Jerry Rivera and" → "Jerry Rivera, and"

Promotion and reception

• Remove wikilink on RMM Records
• "was for the song filmed" → "for the song was filmed"
• "lauded La India's vocals stating her" → "lauded La India's vocals, stating her"
• "energizes the track."" → "energizes the track"." per MOS:QUOTE
• No speech marks are used to end the "comes through like a champ..." quote
• The award should come directly before commercial performance
• "Commercially "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number 4" → "Commercially, "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number four" per MOS:NUM
• Remove pipe on Billboard
• "it ended 1998 ranked" → "the song ended 1998 ranked as"

Charts

• Good

See also

• Good

References

• Copyvio score looks great at 24.8%!!!
• Rest of the refs look good; well done!!!!!

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed after this quick review! --K. Peake 18:58, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

  @Kyle Peake Thanks as always for your reviews! I believe I have addressed all the issues brought up, let me know if there's any I missed. Erick (talk) 16:48, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

  ✓ Pass now, there was one grammatical mistake but I smoothened it out totally! --K. Peake 07:28, 29 June 2022 (UTC)