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Good articleMi Mayor Venganza has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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June 29, 2022Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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I will start this today! --K. Peake 16:52, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Add a comma after fifth studio album
  • "by Isidro Infante and released as" → "by Isidro Infante, and released as"
  • You need to add the genre in comp as salsa with a source, rather than merely having a mention of it in reception
  • "song in which La India tells the woman" → "song, in which La India tells the woman"
  • The lead is out of order after the above sentence; critical reception should come first, then the accolade followed by commercial performance and finally the music video
  • "for the track features" → "for the song features"
  • "was praised by two music critics while" → "were praised by two music critics, while"
  • "peaked at number four and one" → "peaked at numbers four and one"
  • "It was a recipient of" → "The song was a recipient of"

Background and composition

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  • A colon is not needed after five singles
  • Remove comma before Jazzin'
  • "and arranger, Isidro Infante, signed on to" → "and arranger Isidro Infante signed with"
  • "produced by Infante whom" → "produced by Infante, whom"
  • "and is her" → "and is La India's"
  • Remove comma after "Mi Mayor Venganza"
  • Add a sentence with a source clarifying the song itself is salsa, also add more comp info if you can
  • "Jerry Rivera and" → "Jerry Rivera, and"

Promotion and reception

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  • Remove wikilink on RMM Records
  • "was for the song filmed" → "for the song was filmed"
  • "lauded La India's vocals stating her" → "lauded La India's vocals, stating her"
  • "energizes the track."" → "energizes the track"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • No speech marks are used to end the "comes through like a champ..." quote
  • The award should come directly before commercial performance
  • "Commercially "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number 4" → "Commercially, "Mi Mayor Venganza" reached number four" per MOS:NUM
  • Remove pipe on Billboard
  • "it ended 1998 ranked" → "the song ended 1998 ranked as"

Charts

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score looks great at 24.8%!!!
  • Rest of the refs look good; well done!!!!!

Final comments and verdict

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