Talk:Mega Man (1987 video game)/GA1
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Reviewer: Guyinblack25 talk 15:25, 10 June 2010 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
The prose is in good shape aside from one issue I think would confuse the layman.
The lead and development sections refer to the Famicom and NES in a way that implies that they are two different systems, when really they are just two different regional names for the same system. I would stick to the NES name and refer to the regional markets instead. For example, "Famicom home console market" → "Japanese home console market". I think this will better convey that the game was originally designed for a single system.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Things look good here.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- Does a good job of covering the major aspects in sufficient detail.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Reads neutral to me
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- Articles looks to be stable with no major changes occurring.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
The FURs for File:NES Mega Man.png File:MegaManPoweredUp.jpg need some beefing up similar to File:MegamanBox.jpg.
Is there a better image to use in place of the Powered Up cover? Perhaps a screenshot that shows the chibi-design, widescreen dimensions, and either a cutscene or new boss? Not essential, but something to think about.
Another minor issue, the alt text for File:Keiji Inafune.jpg does not describe the image. Something along the lines of "a Japanese man in a black coat" or something similar.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- The article is in very good shape, but I'm putting it on hold until the prose and FUR issues above are sorted out.
- The above issues have been addressed. Good job. (Guyinblack25 talk 04:07, 13 June 2010 (UTC))
- The article is in very good shape, but I'm putting it on hold until the prose and FUR issues above are sorted out.
- Pass/Fail: