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Reviewer: Eddie891 (talk · contribs) 16:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

can attend to shortly. Eddie891 Talk Work 16:33, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Images appropriately licensed Eddie891 Talk Work 13:50, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Cited to reliable sources Eddie891 Talk Work 13:51, 6 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "the longest for a woman in the United States Army" The longest ever or at the time?



  • "Women in the Services Defense Advisory Committee." is not mentioned in the article?


  • "She was given the nickname of Betty" when?


  • "There she was involved with the Berlin Airlift crisis" in what capacity was she 'involved'?


  • What would "WAC consulting" entail?


  • "She had special training at the United States Military Academy Preparatory School in 1976 to have women qualify to attend military academies, since it was then allowed for women" I don't really get what's trying to be said here, could you take a stab at clarifying?



  • Cite #6 is a book and needs page numbers. Is there anything further to add from it? It seems to cover the WAC in great detail


Spotcheck
  • "Clarke was born on December 3, 1924, in Rochester, New York" source technically doesn't say where she was born, just that she grew up in Rochester


  • Similarly, while "...as a child ...as a teenager" can probably be assumed, the ages she was at specific schools are not specified


  • "August 10, 1945," source only specifies August


  • other checks come up clean.
holding Eddie891 Talk Work 01:33, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Working Thanks for review. I'll start on the issues. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 09:48, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]