Talk:Mandy Carter (Ackley Bridge)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:03, 21 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Try dividing the lead into two paragraphs.
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Mention something from #Development.
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:34, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the comma after "pregnant".
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Emma explains to best friend Emma" - who is the first Emma?
- Spelling mistake – fixed. – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"to best friend" → "to her best friend"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The trust ask" → "The trust asks"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"while on her maternity leave" → "while on maternity leave"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"well developed" → "well-developed"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Remove the comma after "escape for Mandy".
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"asked her" → "asked about her"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the comma after "comments".
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"everyday" → "every day"
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link Digital Spy.
- Done – DarkGlow • 23:13, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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