Talk:Man Down (Holby City)/GA1
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Responded to all your comments below. Soaper1234 - talk 22:02, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Infobox and lead
[edit]- Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT.
- "who he" → "with who he"
- Quotations need sources per WP:REF.
- "The episodes serves" → "The episode serves"
- Since its a type of camera, uses of Steadicam should be capitalized.
- Is "benefitied" a typo or a British variant of the word?
- "had walk" → "had walked"
- All Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:01, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Plot
[edit]- Without the parenthetical names, the plot is at 491 words. Try getting it to 400 per MOS:TVPLOT.
- "A flashbacks" → "A flashback" or "Flashbacks"
- There appears to be a word missing in between "into hospital".
- All Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Production
[edit]- Remove the comma after "had been dropped".
- "would featured" → "would be featured"
- "portrayl" appears to be a typo.
- "Holby City have" → "Holby City has"
- "rather using the traditional steadicam" → "rather than using the traditional Steadicam"
- All Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:49, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Promotion and broadcast
[edit]- "insits" → "insist"
- Promotional material should list reactions to the content not just "[content] aired [date]" per WP:TRAILER.
- All Done Soaper1234 - talk 21:58, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
Reception
[edit]- This section looks good.
References and notes
[edit]- In the notes, change "see [...]" to "As depicted in [...]" per consistency with other GA-articles (similar example).
- Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).
- Done prior to the review. Soaper1234 - talk 22:00, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
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