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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:24, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Some Dude From North Carolina: Responded to all your comments below. Soaper1234 - talk 22:02, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Don't use small font in the infobox per WP:SMALLFONT.
  • "who he" → "with who he"
  • Quotations need sources per WP:REF.
  • "The episodes serves" → "The episode serves"
  • Since its a type of camera, uses of Steadicam should be capitalized.
  • Is "benefitied" a typo or a British variant of the word?
  • "had walk" → "had walked"

Plot

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  • Without the parenthetical names, the plot is at 491 words. Try getting it to 400 per MOS:TVPLOT.
  • "A flashbacks" → "A flashback" or "Flashbacks"
  • There appears to be a word missing in between "into hospital".

Production

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  • Remove the comma after "had been dropped".
  • "would featured" → "would be featured"
  • "portrayl" appears to be a typo.
  • "Holby City have" → "Holby City has"
  • "rather using the traditional steadicam" → "rather than using the traditional Steadicam"

Promotion and broadcast

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  • "insits" → "insist"
  • Promotional material should list reactions to the content not just "[content] aired [date]" per WP:TRAILER.

Reception

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  • This section looks good.

References and notes

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  • In the notes, change "see [...]" to "As depicted in [...]" per consistency with other GA-articles (similar example).
  • Archive all archivable sources (either manually or with this tool).

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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