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GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 23:14, 17 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Infobox

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  • Genre: Folk rock → folk elements are not part of the gerne, is just influences
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:24, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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  • Universal Music → Universal Music via digital download and streaming services
  • and fans → remove
  • occasions in Amsterdam and Madrid → occasions, including in Amsterdam and Madrid.
 Done

Background and composition

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  • song length → songs length
  • together with → and
  • With a duration time of three minutes, the Albanian language song → The Albanian language song, which lasts three minutes,
  • Add the release dates here
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:25, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Critical reception

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  • President Meta additionally praised his voice and performance → very bias
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:26, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Music video and promotion

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  • intercut ten times, and as the video progresses, it additionally features → intercut several times, and as the video progresses, it features
  • frantic → not very encyclopedic
  • Add the music video source at the end of the description. Not done
@MarioSoulTruthFan: I hope its correct now.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Festivali i Këngës

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  • Fine

Lisbon

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  • small band of instrumentalists, → remove instrumentalists
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:27, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Personnel

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  • Fine

Track listing

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  • Fine

Release history

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  • Fine

References

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  • Rate Your Music → non-reliable
  • Reference 21 → publisher, not work
  • Reference 33 and 34 → no publisher or work mentioned
  • The voice source is not working properly → archive it
 Done--Lorik17 (talk) 10:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Overall

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@MarioSoulTruthFan:  Done--Lorik17 (talk) 11:57, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Iaof2017: I made changes to he genre regarding the sources and you forgot something in the music video section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:36, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@MarioSoulTruthFan: Thank you, I followed the comment for the music video section, I hope i did it right.--Lorik17 (talk) 14:38, 19 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]