Talk:Mabel Louisa Dean Paul
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Citations need work
[edit]I got bumped out after an edit conflict. The citations could use some work, and the article could use more citations in general. As one example, there are a bunch of dates in newspaper and magazine titles that should be in the year. So |title=...Feb 20 |year=1919 should be |date=Feb 20, 1919. Snowman304|talk 23:08, 19 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for your comments. I’ve also looked for consistency with the citations. Hopefully you consider this an improvement Polished-Aware (talk) 00:33, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Updated citations and structure. Polished-Aware (talk) 10:39, 20 September 2024 (UTC)
- Updated again. Much appreciated Polished-Aware (talk) 09:41, 21 September 2024 (UTC)