Talk:Lynne Talley

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Review

The article has been much improved by the edits of Allisonlee9, particularly the Early life and Career sections (old page version). I've made a few changes (mostly reference formatting and some wording changes). I have a few suggestions to further improve it:

I think that Other Major Field Experience would work better incorporated into the Career section in prose form.
The same may be true of the Sabbatical section, since they may have been significant occurrences in her biography.
I'm still not sure about the seagoing experience section. It may be better compressed to a 2-5 sentences summarising the ships and period (e.g. Talley served onthe R/V Knorr during the 1990s as the chief scientist). Again, this could be integrated into the Careers section, or be a subsection of it.

Hopefully these suggestions are helpful, T.Shafee(Evo﹠Evo)^talk 02:33, 19 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]