Talk:Luther James-Wildin/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 09:58, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Avoid single-sentence paras, I would embellish para 1 of the lead a touch.
Is there a general link for "academy"?
"for Highfield Rangers" as this is a relatively unknown side, perhaps say "in Leicester"?
Worth noting that Grantham Town etc are non-League.
"James-Wildin started.." He started.
We have a link for Sunday league at Sunday league football.
"part of a "very successful young side" at " according to?
"to try and play at a" no need for "try and"
"one-week trial at Notts County" don't repeat Notts County.
Link for professional football.
"at Grantham" Town.
Link manager.
"the play-off places" link.
"from 30-yards" no hyphen, and convert.
"EFL League Two Goal of the Month" any links for this award?
"the COVID-19 pandemic in March" there's a UK specific Covid article.
"in 14th-place in" no need to hyphenate.
"for Antigua & Barbuda " it was "and" not "&" before.
"assists" link.
"substitute" link.
"as a right-back and" link right-back first time.

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 10:16, 31 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @The Rambling Man:. Thanks for taking the time out to review the article. I have made all of the suggested changes, although wasn't able to locate a link for the Goal of the Month awards. Cheers. SBFCEdit (talk) 23:55, 2 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]