Talk:Lucius Neratius Marcellus/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y
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3.a Y

3.b Y
4
4.a Y
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5.a Y
6
6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

Marcellus was elected consul twice, first under Domitian and later under Hadrian. suggest listing years of consulship; combine with beginning of second paragraph in lead.

Done.

Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall. suggest:
Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal from the Antonine Wall to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall.

Done.

he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless. suggest:
. He he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless.

The sentence doesn't make sense then.

The frontier was withdrawn to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation. suggest:
The frontier was withdrawn from the Antonine Wall to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation.

Done.

@Gog the Mild: That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:07, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Iazyges: Hi. That was prompt as usual. Thanks. 3 out of 4 prose suggestions implemented. If you meant to pass this as a GA - I think that you did - then you forgot to alter the header. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:54, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Gog the Mild: Apologies, passed now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:18, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]