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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Lucius Neratius Marcellus/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

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GA Criteria

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Prose Suggestions

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Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

  • Marcellus was elected consul twice, first under Domitian and later under Hadrian. suggest listing years of consulship; combine with beginning of second paragraph in lead.
Done.
  • Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall. suggest:
    Marcellus supervised a stabilisation of the situation which included a withdrawal from the Antonine Wall to what was later to become the line of Hadrian's Wall.
Done.
  • he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless. suggest:
    . He he had been adopted by his uncle Marcus Hirrius Fronto Neratius Pansa, consul in 73 or 74, who was childless.
The sentence doesn't make sense then.
  • The frontier was withdrawn to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation. suggest:
    The frontier was withdrawn from the Antonine Wall to the line of the Stanegate, the future Hadrian's Wall. Marcellus certainly managed at least a portion of this major reorganisation.
Done.
@Iazyges: Hi. That was prompt as usual. Thanks. 3 out of 4 prose suggestions implemented. If you meant to pass this as a GA - I think that you did - then you forgot to alter the header. Gog the Mild (talk) 17:54, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Gog the Mild: Apologies, passed now. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 22:18, 29 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]