Talk:Little Island at Pier 55

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Review: July 22, 2021. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Little Island at Pier 55 appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 8 July 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Little Island at Pier 55 (pictured), a new artificial island park in New York City, was described as being "in the theatrical vein of 18th century English garden follies"?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/July. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Little Island (Hudson River).

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Valereee (talk) 18:19, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Little Island panorama

~~... that the new Little Island park in New York City (pictured) sits on 132 pots and cost $260 million?~~ Source: Gannon, Devin (May 20, 2021). "NYC's newest park Little Island finally opens on the Hudson River". 6sqft.
- ALT1:~~... that the newly completed Little Island at Pier 55 park in New York City (pictured) had been canceled in 2017, only to be revived after just 43 days?~~ Source: Bagli, Charles V. (October 25, 2017). "'Diller Island' Is Back From the Dead". The New York Times.
- ALT2:~~... that Douglas Durst, who financed lawsuits against the Little Island park, claimed the park's promoter Barry Diller said he wished Durst had been killed by his own brother?~~ Source: "Futuristic NY pier project pits billionaire vs billionaire". AP NEWS. July 23, 2017.
- ALT3:~~... that New York City parkgoers, booking reservations for Little Island at Pier 55 (pictured), caused Little Island's website to crash on its opening day on May 21?~~ Source: https://gothamist-client.prod.nypr.digital/arts-entertainment/photos-explore-little-island-nycs-luxurious-new-floating-park-hudson
- ALT4:... that Little Island at Pier 55 (pictured), a new artificial island park in New York City, was described as being "in the theatrical vein of 18th century English garden follies"? Source: https://www.nytimes.com/2021/05/20/arts/little-island-barry-diller.html

Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Heiligen-Geist-Kapelle, Bruck

5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Self-nominated at 22:52, 22 May 2021 (UTC).[reply]

Interesting park, and really recent, wow! On fine sources, no copyvio obvious. In all hooks, pictured is missing, but I can say right away that I like ALT1 best of the lot. I'd also interested in the website crash on opening day, and the NYT critic. Quite generally for any hook: I believe that the full name of the park sounds more respectful, and would grab more attention just by being longer, and I think File:Little Island Panorama (50236511951).jpg (or a crop) shows better in small size. Good luck! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 17:40, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Gerda Arendt: Thanks for the review. I have added these extra hooks, fixed the name of the park, and swapped out the image. Epicgenius (talk) 19:07, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I like the extras, but tink they should have some info about the extreme newness, - for ALT3 that could be the date, for the other the word "new". Will you try? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:14, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Gerda Arendt: Thanks, I have done this. Epicgenius (talk) 21:15, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you, and like ALT4. Here's my version of the other

ALT3a: ~~... that when Little Island at Pier 55 (pictured) opened in New York City on 21 May 2021, ticket bookings caused the park's website to crash?~~ - You can play with it, I need sleep.

The image is licensed and says more than 1000 words. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:26, 26 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Gerda Arendt: Regarding ALT3b which you removed, I was tweaking 3a a bit. I clarified it was "ticket bookings" instead of just "bookings". Maybe "a large number of reservations" or something similar may work. Epicgenius (talk) 00:01, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for explaining, - see, I was tired and didn't read that far, sorry about that. I now just tweaked ALT3a by adding "ticket" to it. But next time, please don't place a hook above the tick symbol. (Better but not as urgent: don't place later ALTs in the nomination section but in the flow of the conversation. The nomination is signed with a date.) - "Excessive" is a pov word, any other phrase? "the run on tickets"? ... something that direction? ... you are right that otherwise just the software might be blamed ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:12, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It's all right. You'd probably expect that I'd know not to move hooks above ticks after 300 or so DYK nominations (I even forgot how many), but I still have a lot to learn. I'd suggest something like this:

ALT3c: ... that when Little Island at Pier 55 (pictured) opened in New York City on 21 May 2021, a large volume of ticket bookings caused the park's website to crash? Epicgenius (talk) 16:23, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]
fine, thank you --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:43, 27 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Little Island at Pier 55/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 21:16, 21 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"guiderails" should be written as two words.
"food and drink" → "food and drinks"
Add a hyphen between "custom made".
Remove the comma after "proper environmental review".
Capitalize titles ("mayor", "governor", "senator").
"work site" should be written as one word.
Wikilink Michael Kimmelman and Derek Blasberg.
Wall Street Journal → The Wall Street Journal
Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
Mark references from The Real Deal New York with "|url-access=limited".
Mark references from The Wall Street Journal with "|url-access=subscription".
Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:27, 22 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Some Dude From North Carolina, thanks. I have done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 15:47, 22 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

"Renamed" after what?

One sentence reads as follows:

"The project was renamed Little Island in 2019 and opened on May 21, 2021."

But we are not told what its name was before this "renaming".

I hope someone knowledgeable about this subject can fix this.

Stage "and" Ampitheater

The opening paragraph says the park has "a small stage, and a 687-seat amphitheater." Are these two different things? Or should we change this to "a 687-seat amphitheater with a small stage"? MiguelMunoz (talk) 04:01, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]